by Misery Demise
Don't worry about the anonymous cowards. Keep Writing. Try to use an editor for those few mistakes and don't type with one hand.
I think you capturedthe essence of how a D/S relationship can be. Good Job!
I thought the story was very sensual. The element of control, complete domination and submission is very erotic. Pain and pleasure do have an intense sensory effect during a sexual encounter, I loved the story.