by lily_ann
There is nothing as erotic as a well written story from a woman's perspective. What makes it even better is that it is about a woman who is sexually assertive.
briliant story. reading this was like watching as ron start to enter your cunt emptying his cum deep inside your very horny hole.
awesome writing brilliant story love it. and it was ON HER TERMS
could have ended it better. Thought you took the cheap way out. Still great though....
girl, with a sharp brain and a tigress' heart. She recognized her own desires, accepted them, and acted on them with courage all the way through. I *like* this girl, and sometimes wish I could be more like her.
I've been a fan of your stories for a while now and I almost missed this new posting. In my defense, it is the holiday season and I suppose we're all busy, yes? ;)
I enjoyed this and while I'm not much of one for dominance and such, this one didn't go overboard with that. I'd definitely be up for more from Alexa and Ron, or anything from you. Take care and Merry Christmas!
Lily...good to see you back. I look forward to you getting your writing legs back under you.
I have to agree with your comments on this one. Not quite up to your usual standards. It felt rushed, a bit contrived.
That being said its 10 times better than alot of the dreck on here..
zihua
Such a good story, if this is you rough I cant wait to get to your 'good' stuff. This so much matched a fantasy of mine, turned me on so much, I was rock hard, thank you. Does it turn you on when you write your stories?
I know it feels like you can make the rest of the story along the way... but learning the back story of Ron... makes me wonder if this should also have a part 2.
I have read two of your stories and they are so fucking hot!
When I read your works it leaves me wishing I were one of the characters. Thank you for sharing, you get five star's from me and added to my favorite author list.
I don't like fighting, I don't like dominance games, I HATE disrespect - but this story totally sold the scenario, and it's just hot as fuck. I really hope one day you'll be back with more...
This needs to be a series.
I agree with some of the other comments. I too hate dominance and fights. I dislike disrespect. But this story really made it come together well. Please add a part 2 too.
Didn’t finish this. When she kissed him I got out of this sick tale.
Bill S.