All Comments on 'On Orgasm Pond'

Great job!

I totally enjoyed this well written tale. There is something for every one and such a sweet plot as well.

I feared her whole-hearted orgy participation might stop their romance. I am glad it did not. 5 stars!

well written

Just the right length. Plenty of action but, also, the essential element of a story line. Well told. 5*

I didn't feel any connection with any of the characters. This story is a recitation of sexual acts, competently told, but devoid of any feeling. The characters all go from 0-60 at warp speed, even the shy school teacher. Author, you can do better than write stroke stories like this.

I liked the story in general and would have given it 5 stars, were it not for your misuse of pronouns. Examples: " I had not told Becky about Susan and I skinny dipping on Paradise Lake the other day." That should be "me", not "I". "When she made her way to Susan and I, ..." Again, "... to Susan and me."

Unlike Anonymous, I didn't find the sex unconvincing at all. In my experience, most sex happens as you describe, without much preamble.

Jerking off when there's horny women to have sex with...why? Why would you rather jerk off than have sex with hot and horny women? I don't get it.