All Comments on 'On The Auction Block'

Awesome.

that was amazing cant wait to read more

I can hardly wait until his mom, at some point, finds her panties in his room. I will be reading all the upcoming chapters. Five stars from me!

Great story - can't wait for more! Five *s!

and the jaw line and smile did not tip her off? Either his friends are clones or she is foolish.

PLEASE DO CONTINUE, THIS CANT BE THE END OF SUCH A GREAT STORY.

It wont be fair, if you not consider writing next chapter. I will not even suggust my idea cus I wanna read your words. By the way 'On The Auction Block' is one of the best I ever reads.

Wow this was so great don't stop now need a ch 2 goen on to tell about showing off to her son's friends & making out with her son again & maybe each one of his friends to wowwwwwwwwww.

Be so disappointed if this is not continued.

wow what a hot read thx

keep going

Now that she has agreed to be a slut, I think it would be a good read to find out what he does to her.

Eventually she must find out that the young stud who makes her do all of the slutty things is her son, and that would be a good read too.

Thanks for the good story

Excellent story. Loved the mother turning into an instant slut when confronted by her sons big cock. More of the same please - some slut training would be good, as well as the son watching his friends fuck her brains out.

I like the way you keep the reader interested in what Jason does and plans to do with his mother. I would love to read what he does next to her and if she ever finds out who her 'Mystery' lover really is. I truly hope that you continue to keep us readers captivated with at least another chapter or two.

Keep up the good work!

A swingers auction and his mother as a complete slut? I think I have to puke.....

I can not wait to read more. Great story!

This was truly fantastic. Can't wait for more!

Awesome and can't wait for more!

We deserve a part two! We demand a part two! We MUST have a part two!!!!!!!!

Great story. Great scenario. There has to be more. Perhaps one or two more anonymous encounters before mother realises the identity of her young stud, then more as she can't give him up; son or not.

Thanks for the read.

Oh wow got to have more please

Mom need to know that was her son. If she ends up with him and his friends together at some point, that would totally rock.

Thanks,

Continue please

GREAT! but yeah.. she needs to find out. i loved the description of the costume and would love more of that.

please continue this story , great read

I loved you story line through the set up and the action. It needs closure, though!

Part 2 might include many things. Now that 'mom' has found someone to fulfill her needs and desires, he needs to find a way to make them both happy. Clearly, his 'dad' has found this outlet to satisfy his needs, and knows what to do for himself, even if he is unable to satisfy his wife's fetish.

It would be a challenge for 'son'. Can you find a way for 'son' to extend 'mom's fantasy and emotional needs long enough to get her past the mother-son thing? Can he keep taking charge of her after she knows who he is? Is 'dad' able to object, or care? Can 'son' stay secretive enough to maintain the 2nd persona long enough? What happens when 'son' finds own girlfriend? When parent(s) get older?

Anxiously awaiting your follow-on chapter(s), along with many others.

Please don't let this story die out...

We need a continiuation on this story.

I loved the story line, but I think you should make another part showing mom living out her fantasy and maybe son fucking mom and then her realizing who she fucked or dad realizing it and deciding to share hr or something!

We need to see if she realy dose become his slut.

Definitely needs a 2nd part describing how the mom is acting around her son and his friends, son finally revealing his identity, mom's reaction, etc. This story is AWESOME! Greatly written!

Excellent story. One of the best I read. You have to write a second chapter.

The son turning his mom into a permanent slut is outrageous! She can fuck and suck because he wants her to most of all. Hope his plan for mom domination works fo him. To think,she got to take his virginity! I think Erica ,his girlfriend has a boyfriend with a new attitude and she will soon be sucking and fucking!!

You def need a second chapter or more.

If there is a second part, I suggest you find a secret way for Jason (as the "mystery man") and his mom to communicate. That would allow him to create the elaborate control games she craves.

A good horny read...

I think his mom should find out it's him so they could fuck at home as much as they need to.

The hidden identity of mother Rachel Anderson while being bought unknowingly by her son Jason is quite a unique theme. The "purchase" of Rachel being unknown by her son until after the bid was somewhat of fate bringing mother and son carnally, incestually and wantonly together.

The fact that Jason has decided--after the very first fuck EVER of his life, just so happens to be with his mother tonight, losing his virginity, never having even seen a naked female body--that he is now the master of his slave-mother, is not only astounding but totally not believeable!! Though our incest stories are fiction, with no reality figuratively nor literally, a good incest story should have some degree of being real in order for the reader's fantasy to blossom and work its magic!! This story has no aspect of believeability, in the first instance of Jason going from a total eighteen year old virgin, with no indications that he had never even watched pornography, and after a couple hours with his mother (her not knowing it is her son who is fucking her), all the way to being a dominating master of his "declared" slave-mother!!!!! Additionally, in all his almost immediately gained slut, whoring knowledge he has also determined that he is going to pimp his mother to all his friends!! Let's hope that Jason and his mother decide to keep their incest totally within the blood-related mother and son circle--or forget the incest aspects and make the story one of whoring, pimping, BDSM and other kindred deviancy and perversion!

Damn.. What a shit!!!

I agree that he should reveal himself, with her panties, to her so they can fuck a lot, but we'll have to wait and see-hot sex in this good story-thanks

A slut and a whore! Letting herself be bought and paid for. This is So Hot!.

Eine Mutter, die ihren eigenen Sohn nicht erkennt. Eine unglaubliche Geschichte, fast schon unglaubwürdig.

Aber die von mir sehr verehrte "She_Andrea" hat sinngemäß gesagt: Wir lesen "literotica"-Geschichten nicht aus Lust an der Wahrheit sondern aus Lust an der Unterhaltung. Recht hat sie!

so far

of an accident to be believable. this should be interesting.

So we all get that people out there are into the whole slut-whore and woman-degrading fantasy as well as anything else that floats the old sausage. I just don't get the need to portray the woman as the guy's mother. That specific fantasy is its own storyline.

This guy is supposed to be a virgin one second- and he's never before seen a real live naked woman to boot- then he's suddenly making plans to sexually dominate his alleged mother and pimp her out to any of his buddies who happen to drop by the family home in future. All this before he's even fully seated inside of his fantasy mom.

This turned out to be just a confused over-the-top stroke story for a specific audience. It's sad because the auction setup with hidden faces showed some promise to lead somewhere as the son finds out about his mother's latent desire for a secret lover. It's a quantum leap to also make her be a closeted exhibitionist slut as it makes no sense that her activity would have stayed a secret in the town.

If you're going to toss the mother-son relationship believability straight out the window, then don't use that concept at all. It's like you stirred about three different fantasies together and made a rotten-egg omelet.

At the adult club, mostly men, I had got there late. I had seen a few guys giving blow jobs, one guy being fucked hard by a much younger guy. The announcement, the midnight auction, will be held in 15 minutes, buy your tokens, last chance to spend the night with those being auctioned. I asked the guy, yeh, 5 guys put themselves up for auction, they have 5 overnight rooms, tokens $20 each, they pay for the room, usually older guys wanting a fuck, they go cheap. I bought $100 worth. First up was an old guy, 50s he went for $20 bought by an older guy. Second a middle aged guy, long cock, went for $65 again bought by an older guy.Third a crossdresser, not bad I bid $40 but was out bid, went for $70. 4th up was a young guy, great body, big cock,, bidding was strong, $125 to a middle aged guy. Last, was a surprise, a woman, masked, rather plump, mid 50s or so, most guys walked away, a bid of $10 was put in, I thought well lucky last, I bid $20, no other bids. Mine, I paid, went to meet her, she stopped, oh no, I cant there has been a mistake, the guy said he paid, there is an agreement, Room 5, enjoy her. He handed me the key, I opened the door, we entered, I locked it. The room had a t.v a bed, a toilet and hand basin. I looked at her, whats the problem, I paid, Well, Rob, she knows my name, she took off her mask. It was my mums oldest sister, June. It was awkward, gee, sorry, I didn't know. I looked at her naked body, then why, she said since Wayne left, for the 30 odd year old we met at a swingers party, I come here in the hope there could be a guy interested, after all they bid for the trannies and crossdressers. I said that's because they look like a women and the guy knows he is going to get, well you know, most of the guys here are either gay and looking to get fucked or fuck some guy. My Aunt said what about you, well I am bi, but I like to, I stopped, what, her hand was on my cock, well, it doesn't matter, tell me as she knelt, taking my cock in her warm mouth, well guys like my cock and offer their bottoms to me, I like that.Mmm, no wonder, nice and thick, she turned and knelt, please, I am so wet, reaching for my cock and guiding it to her pussy, she pushed back oh yes, yes, so hard and it wasn't long before I filled her pussy. I moved away, lay down, I did and she mounted my still hard cock, grinding and pushing until with her head thrown back she orgasmed. She lay on me, I think she slept, I rolled her over, got some lube and began rubbing some around her bottom. She woke up, I moved up to her mouth, suck it, she did, I held her head. This is what I do to the guys, she gagged, I pulled back, I showed her the 2 big blobs of lube I put on, I moved back, lifted her legs, positioned my cock, relax and pushed hard, I slid into her bottom, feeling it open for me, she yelped, moaned, screamed and orgasmed twice before I delivered my cum into her grasping bottom. I lay on her, she said , I like it there, when we used to swing, Wayne told the guys I was into anal and I am, there was no shortage of takers, big, small, thick, roll over I did and she sat with my cock in her bottom, squeezing, sometimes I would take up to 8 cocks in my bottom, she was rubbing her pussy, oh, stay hard and again as she moved she orgasmed again. I started pushing up, I was hard, she moved off, I was disappointed until her mouth found my cock, then 1 ,then 2 fingers found my hole and with a shove caused my cock to give what sperm i had left to her mouth.I love my aunt, I see her often,she also still goes to the club.

... a sequel!

Oh come on!

He is not satisfied to have his mother but wants to show her off? I hope it backfires on him, she fucks are brains out of one of his friends that she is convinced is her lover as runs off leaving him alone.

When you have something that beautiful you cherish it, not show it off and whore it out.

it's quite obvious that the author needs to be banned from this site. monkeys can write better stories. centrum seems to hate women...his stories portray women as helpless, confused and slutty. i wonder what centrum looks like. probably has a butt ugly face. come no centrum you can do better. at least we help you can. because reading your stories has been a waste of my time so far. how about writing a story where the women control your protagonist...that would be different.

I will add my opinion. Anyone is entitled to any opinion he/she can defend. I don't happen to agree with some and not others. To those who were disappointed the option to hit the back button was always available to you. If you continued to read it was a voluntary act, If you did not why not just move on to another story????

With 1000's of them at your beck and call, I'm sure there will be at least one that is consistent with your outlook. for my part, I found the story diverting, reasonable written, flawed, but not fatally so, and will read ch. 02.

eighteen year (eighteen-year)

beach goers (beachgoers)

options (-her) his (own) age

on stage (onstage)

pulled (-back up) (his) shirt (up)

he did know (didn’t)

young father's (fathers)

if it was (were) (4)

Every time (Everytime) (4)

two shot (shots)

gives (a) blowjob

coercing her into a life of public exhibitionism (THERE WAS NO COERCION NECESSARY OR PRESENT IN THEIR INTERACTION!!!! SHE FANTASIZED ABOUT IT AND WANTED IT FOR YEARS!!!! HOW COULD THAT POSSIBLY BE ANYTHING BUT A VOLUNTARY SURRENDER ON HER PART????)

A very good and so much fun to read story! Thank you!

He should have taken off hi mask after she swallowed his cum

Looking forward to part two!

Surprise Jason your mom is a whore. Not only that but you pretty much set it up that any of your friends can fuck your mom but really wouldn't be to hard as much as a whore she is. Poor Jason lost his virginity and fell in love with his slut mom. Hope you don't mind sharing with every swinging dick around but considering he wants her to act and dress like a slut to everybody he doesn't give a shit about his mom anyway. Sorry but don't care about Jason or Rachel as characters. I'm sure this would make for a good porn script.

Please

For a slut scum of the earth story I finally liked this one. Question why didn't he have the biggest dick she ever had and why didn't he fuck her again??? OK absolutely not over 8 inches and 6.5 inches in diameter. Any thing bigger ruins a story because the average vagina is 4 to 6 inches long and perfect for the average 5.5 to 6.5 inch dick. So mom needs to be very tall and maybe have a bit longer vagina.

Good but not great AAA+++

Excellent yarn one of Centrum 1000’s best by far.

Liked all the emphasis placed on the ladies skirts.

Loved it. I can't wait to see how this continues

Nagyon tetszett, jöhet a haver, hogy keményen megbassza és utána a fia többi barátja.

Extremely interesting story although I find it a little hard to believe the mother did not recognize her son by his vioce. In a moment of passion, I can not believe he did not slip up. Finally, I am glad the son is mature enough to recognize that his mother and father are sexual beings and this does not lessen their status as parents.

He was Awful good at fucking, for being a Virgin, maybe he really Studded his porn videos? What son would want their mother to dress like a slut all of the time, even at home, Showing her husband, and son everyday. I Doubt that his mother would really be shocked and cut him off if she found out that it was her son fucking, not being this big of a slut..

Slut Mom is NOT erotic.

Never got the appeal of the M/S stories where the mom is a slut that's fucking just any guy especially while married (often in those there's some kind of swinging/hotwifing/swapping like here). Would have been better if she had just attended this as a one-off to get out of a funk after a bad marriage or something. But I guess some authors prefer the mom to be a slut. Meh.