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by Phrenetic_Ice

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AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Excellent, very well written.

Very well written, I think I've learnt a few things.

Such a really sweet story of a young girls first time and by the way you wrote it, I felt like I was there experiencing almost every little move.

Thanks so much.

S-DesS-Desover 17 years ago
Your Story....

Has been mentioned on the New Story Reviews thread of the Author's Hangout.

kelly_-1kelly_-1over 17 years ago
Brilliant piece of work

Very well written, brought back fond memories of a similiar situation. Keep up the good work.

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Former journalist, truck-driver, actor, salesman, firefighter, marketing manager, teacher, author - currently publisher of business cd-roms, my life's resume is covered in the fully dysfunctional autobiography "Cool Among The Flames," (Amazon) https://www.amazon.com...