All Comments on 'On the Other Hand Ch. 09-10'

I hope that Will and Nicole are able to have a child, but realize you have probably already finished this story.

Thanks for giving me something worth reading,

you know you and a couple of other really good authors here at Lit like to keep me in suspense.

Appreciate your imagination and quality,

SliperyRox

we need Holmes and House, TK U MLJ LV NV

Thanks for the offering.

Interesting how the arrival of "action" changes one's perspective.

I had thought this a well-written but not very exciting standard love story--a "Loving Wives" that for once didn't revolve around cheating wives or husbands and thereafter either BTB or RAAC. But with the incidental involvement of the main characters in actions which in reality constantly impact our lives and the world in ways which are always there and usually below the radar--this became a love story larger than its genre.

Thank you for the rollercoaster ride to this point. A damn good "tale well told". Anticipating the finale to be just as good. 10 out of 10

I’m liking it a lot, thanks for sharing your story with us. I particularly like that ch.9-10 end with “to be concluded” rather than “to be continued.”