All Comments on 'On The Road with Jeremiah'

I really liked this story, even if it reminded me of a movie I saw. Well written and erotic and different, so thank you very much and please keep writing!

A very well crafted short story. You took a historic photograph and spun a very believable tale around it. You brought the tough times of the Depression to life and also brought out the enduring human need for love even in the hardest of times. Well done and enjoyable!

I have read many stories but this is as real life as any i have ever read!! It didn't just stir one eroticly, but stirred one's emotions knowing this is as real as life can be! Excellent.... or better... Yes... Better!!!!!!

Wow, what a great story!

The usual blow job and nothing for the woman. You could have eaten her out and provided some spice to this story. I was waiting, and then nothing ...