All Comments on 'One and the Other Ch. 02b'

Better start hiding assets

Each chapter was worse than its predecessor. A waste of space.

Cheating whorehusnand. I’ve never written that before, but that’s what this was about.

Is he any better than a cheating slut....hummmmm bow wow wow. Cheating husband and a muff diving mistress......she'll want half.

at why he wanted his mistress to seduce his wife. Why do writers like to tell us how they first got laid twenty years before the story takes place? How does that improve the story? This is an interesting story, but this was a very slow chapter.