All Comments on 'One August Night'

Part 2 would be good - this is a great story.

More sex with the mother. The start of a great series. Thisis your best style of writing.

You have a wonderful story line started. Looking forward to

next chapter.

Some more please! Looking forward to the next installment. Both mother and sister together, maybe?

Hope there is more to come as it is a good start

the part with tina was awesome.. mom seemed good but that part of the story seemed rushed - no details. Typically you would expect a story like this to involve a threesome with mother and daughter, but i think imho that i would bring in a girlfriend of jimmys that falls into the family secret and maybe reluctantly goes bi with mom or tina.

just a suggestion but then i have been told i have alot of them...LOL..

good luck

Please keep going and bring us part two! One suggestion...make Mom's part a bit more hotter; I'm sure she is one sexy bitch!

I'll be starting on part 2 this week. And Mom will be a lot better in the next story.

THANK YOU!

What a fuckin hot story, wow.

Please continue! Great story! Plase ad some more details on the sex scenes. Paint them with words!

Thanks for writing!

sexmate

more details with his mom will be great, good story line, very good indeed, looking forward for the 2nd part with more dirty words with his mom donna.

Keep it up do a part2 Loved it

Good, but the end was a bit abrupt.

Is he gonna try to get them to get it on with each other? Is this gonna be the permanent arrangement for all of them?

Is he gonna knock either or both of them up?

Part 2 will be on someday. It takes fricking forever to get something posted on here. Sorry, I wrote it now we just wait and wait and wait and wait and wait.

HI,

Good scene, mim got short shoft. More details would be good.

keep it upp/

Les

great story felt it could of used more details cant wait for part two are you going to try and bring the young date in to the story

cool but the way hes doing internal cum shots in part two or maybe three im betting not only his sister but any dates he has are going to be pregnant

I'd like to change my name to Jimmy! I know it is a story but It made me dream and cum hard. Thanks

That was a great story, hope you write some more, yes I wish my name was Jimmy too.

This story had the two best incest stories, mother/son and brother sister. The others fall waaaaay behind, IMO. And your descriptions of the action make it better.

More more more more more PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE

This is a terrific story of hot, beautiful motherfucking as only the great L.A. can write them. Just consider the quote in the title. It's downright lyrical and it perfectly captures the feelings of a mother getting the fuck of her life from her darling baby boy. Jimmy's a very lucky boy. He's doing what lots and lots of sons can only whack off dreaming about. He's sticking his big hard cock up between his own mother's legs, right up her mommy-hole, the same wonderful hole he came out of. Can you imagine the awe and delight, the bursting boyish pride of the lad, who now has his cock up his own mother's cunt up to his balls. Jimmy keeps telling him mom how much he loves her cunt, how her cunt makes his cock feel totally alive like never before, how he's tingly all through his young body, head to toe. His mother loves having her Jimmy back up "the place she’d kept him safe and cared for him" for nine months, his first and best home, her warm wet loving motherly twat. That's truly "where every good son needs to be." And every mom needs to feel what Jimmy's mom feels, as her boy blows his hot young balls and fills her beloved twat with a huge geyser of creamy semen.

What happened to the girl he was first dating? They were going to go out again. Talk about that. Otherwise it was great. The part about the mom freaked me out though.

Really enjoyed the story. Looking forward to reading the rest.

Short and sweet. Keep it up.