All Comments on 'One Incredible Costume'

Fun story, but, oy vey, another shaved pussy.

A really good read, plenty of great descriptions and good characters

It makes me happy to think there are actual <b>real</b> young women in this world who have an 'older man' fantasy who prove what they say. Good story, I really liked this.

Even the best memories need refreshing.

Every middle age man's fantasy. Well done

was Jeanie???

Enjoyed this story very much. Please write more torrid teen tales.

Didn't read it in time for the contest, but still an easy 5 star. No wasted words. You didn't over or under describe the scene or Amy.

I'm so wet damn I want a older mans dick

Very hot story. Written well

Very HOT! Loved it.

And I read if on Halloween.

My daughter is probably your age. She and her friends were the fab five, and I wanted 4 of them!

Well done, cudos, bring on MANY MORE CHAPTERS !

Great story! One of my favourite fantasies! A couple of my daughter's friends (all over the age of 20 now - Crap! When I get so old?) have fueled this fantasy for me... too bad none of them are like Amy... they seem to think old guys like me are creepy and icky! LOL! At least I can dream! Thanks for sharing!

... who the h*ll was Jeanie, why was she having to abstain and why was she so p*ssed off?

for both of them.

or, as the saying goes,

a good time was had by all.

That's the way to write a hot sex scene.

well done nothing to reject here god luck Ten Bears43

Look forward to more

Wow, I'm glad I found you. Really excellent, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your stories.

Good read. Very good explicit eroticism. Glad to read that he "pulled out" as he didn't have a condom and she didn't indicate that she was on the pill, although with what you described as her "experience" a reader could assume that she was

Keep those stories cumming

would love to see more of them getting together, and maybe he'll get to experience some girl/girl with amy and cindy........