All Comments on 'One Night'

Please continue this story and let us know how they each dumped the other person and these two end up together!

Truly beautifully written. The images and sense-ual descriptions were right on point, not too long or rambling, but enough to get the full extent of the sight, smell, etc. You're very talented.

I agree with "Fantastic" these two need to end up together. Excellent story, terrifically written. Loved it.

A very enjoyable read and I hope we see these two get together in the future.

This is one of the sweetest and bittersweet stories I have ever read. I hope they end up back toghther at some point, would be a tragedy if they don't.

lovely story

That was an amazingly erotic image as she used the peach to pleasure him. A beautiful story, beautifully written.

I find it a bit depressing that they don't at least try to be together.. I like a happy ending I guess. I know it ruins the "forbidden and bittersweet" aspect of the story if they don't .. but there isn't really a reason in the story for them not to end up together if it's what they want. Only wimps set on being boring mind their place in life in a case like this. Good story though! I liked it enough to be unsettled at the ending anyways ;)

I thought you wrote a wonderful story. unlike the other people on here I think it made a great ending for them to not get together. keep it how it is because in life you never get what you want

please please please right a sequel to this, it was such a lovely story and I find it's so sad to think they won't be together!! pleaseee write another one I'd so gravely appreciate it xx

u should make a continuation. they obviously belong together please dnt stop the story there.

its was captivating, you should definately think about continuing it if you already haven't. A lot more dilouge would make this so story perfect, emotions to how people are feeling when there having sex.

definitely the best story i have read. loved it

We'll thought out story. An exquisite read. All around perfection. Frankly the best story out of the others.

Your story is beautifully written and a nice buildup and a believable storyline - something we would all love to experience. What makes it real, though, are your descriptions of the peaches, the magnolias, the night air, the horses in the paddock, etc. - a reminder to all that a sensual experience involves all of our senses, not just the sense of touch. Thanks for a great read.

Beautifully written. My only thought was that such genuine love and affection was reduced to one spiritual, life changing experience. It hints that lifelong love like this was, is impossible to sustain. It was glorious yet , very sad. Thanks

" tiny gravity-defying breasts ..."

If her breasts are/were tiny then they'd be completely unaffected by gravity!

Waste of time reading the rest!

I hate that “Anonymous” sometimes hides an troll. While not my favorite of your stories, I applaud the effort you took to build wonderful characters. Just wanted them to have a happy ending, and who knows maybe they’ll find each other again in the future.

Very well written. Brings back a certain memory as, like Brett, I too have one.