All Comments on 'One Night Ch. 01-02'

by TheDarkAngel13

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fafhrd09fafhrd09over 12 years ago
Under the circumstances...

...don't you think saying "Coherency is vital, Jake..." was setting your expectations pretty high? I liked the story a lot - it made me laugh, which is important as I've never felt that sex without laughter was really worth the effort... )

TheDarkAngel13TheDarkAngel13over 12 years agoAuthor
to fafhrd09

Thanks for the feedback! :)

I'm glad you liked it and I hope it was good laughs not "she's so dumb" laughs. :P

Thanks for reading and please read more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
THE FEELS

OHMYGOD SO IN LOVE WITH THIS

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