All Comments on 'One Old Man and a Barmaid'

by magmaman

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bruce22bruce22over 15 years ago
The Author always writes good material...

Now why haven't I done a full read on him? Being 70 this

one had especial appeal to me though this guy made it without

any hangups in the story. A truly happy ending story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very good

story with a lot oh heart and soul in it.The characters seem so real,unlike some of the cardboard cut outs that seem to infest this site nowadays.

tinman69stinman69sover 15 years ago
One of the trully great stories on LIT

Being that I am 65 now myself, I can realate to this story. My wife is very sick too. So I will be very much in his shoes too soon, I think. Except that, as far as I know, I am in fairly good health. But the story and characters are just right, very believable and the love and caring and sex was all very much believable. I really appreciate this story! Very well done!

TwoHOTFORU69TwoHOTFORU69over 15 years ago
GOOD>!!

It is a 10 to 1 shot you will read a good story here every day or night and this has been the best for over 3 weeks.! Keep it up and with you writing I know you will.!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great

Thanks, you do write good stories.

Scorpio44Scorpio44over 15 years ago
Every day is a gift!

I hope the young guys read this story and start realizing how blessed they are... and that age can be looked forward to, not feared. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
It's just VERY GOOD.

As said by a couple of others, it is a pleasure to read a well written story. There is depth (but not too much) in your characters. It is a fantasy brought to "life" for many of us old guys. You clearly understand the difference between erotic fiction and pornography. Thanks!

RePhilRePhilover 13 years ago
Great writIng

Thanks for not letting him die

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Get a life

No immortality, so live now.

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 12 years ago
Live with what you have

Enjoy every moment - the good ones become too rare -

cool story -

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
a tender little tale

so glad they hooked up and life is so much better for both of them....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
great voice!

good writing, sweet story - keep on truckin'!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Excellent, feel-good tale. Actually laughed aloud a couple of times. Keep 'me coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
old like me

great read

jimjam69jimjam69over 3 years ago

Great little story

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Brings Back Memories

Your story draws me back to an ole southern country bar down south. Oh the memories. Nice read. Thanks

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 3 years ago
Good story

Made me smile when the son told his bitchy wife to "shut the fuck up".

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 2 years ago

A bit melancholy, but overall a truly engaging story, which I thoroughly enjoyed. Stay healthy, magmaman 5* ~~ JB

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

It is a good story, love it. AAAAA+++++

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6', 186#, published writer. I have worn many hats. As a young man I was crazy, carefree and making wads of money. Then along came a messed up war and I was cannon fodder. From there I came home even crazier, and survived a 120 MPH crash which got me 15 years in a wheelchair...

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