All Comments on 'One Shot Deals: The Female Jock'

Erotic and sexy! Bittersweet at the end but then reality is that sometimes. Having experienced the 'invisible' phenonema I also realize that the image I present is not the one in my mind's eye. Well done. Hope you will write more.

but hopefully not the last revealed. Nice work - as though we were there manning the camera.

More please

Beautifully written! You really must submit some more stories.

And, to all the older men out there -- well, *I* find you sexy!!