All Comments on 'Opposites Attract Ch. 02'

by Gweall

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LysyanaLysyanaabout 13 years ago
great!

I'm already in love with this story. Keep it coming! :)

I like the intensity of the wolves - sorry lycrans. They're perfectly drawn. But most I like the chemistry and fearless talk between Matt and Noah.

cmyoungcmyoungabout 13 years ago
good job

I am really liking this storey, you have painted the world so nicely. the flow of the storey and characters are spot on good work.

Contest4JenContest4Jenabout 13 years ago
Yay....

Ok yay for the new chapter....and yay that they told each other their feelings. Grr for the lycans agreeing to go to war but. Cheers :D

massiveturdmassiveturdabout 13 years ago
fantastic

love the story! hope to read more soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Really enjoyed this

I cant wait to read more!

canndcanndabout 13 years ago

I'd like to see you clear up age. Matt seems he has been a vamp for a long time, obviously older than he looks. He refers to Noah as a boy...how old is Noah? I can't really tell...he seems to be mid twenties in the way he acts but seems a bit innocent at times too. I love the laying eggs thing...nice to switch stuff up from the typical lore. I loved how they communicated during the fight. How they ended up helping one another after starting as enemies. Well-done. I look forward to more but I can't see where it can go other than a witch hunt for Matt since the other vamps left.

AND do go back to Mike and Tony..finally got used to them lol now i want to see what happens

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
War between the Lycans and Vampires?

Like your story but donĀ“t like the idea of war between the races, especially as I like both werewolves/Lycans and Vampires as well. As this is more of a romance you should try to find an elegant solution and let them at least make a truce.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Please finish!

This is starting out really good!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
cant wait

i love this story and i read also the mike and tony story and ive read your other stories too...youre one of my favorites writers on this site if not the best...cant wait for the next installement of both stories our working on...keep up the good work

lgbaby66lgbaby66almost 13 years ago
Please!!!!

Keep writing because it's going good so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!

afrodita79afrodita79almost 13 years ago
love it

can wait to read the next chapter..so post soon

Kazehana552Kazehana552almost 13 years ago

More!!! Lol. Please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
grrrr

if you stop, i will hate you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please!!!!!!!

If you write more i will love you forever!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Pleasant read, but why make the lycans reproduce by laying eggs? It doesn't fit with what we know of evolution and biology. The reader has no problem accommodating the concept of lycans, werewolves and vampires as additional species on planet earth, but the biology and behaviour of these species needs to be consistent with what we know would be "logical", were these species to exist.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
THANK

GOD YOU ONLY DID THREE talk about boring

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