by Gweall
I'm already in love with this story. Keep it coming! :)
I like the intensity of the wolves - sorry lycrans. They're perfectly drawn. But most I like the chemistry and fearless talk between Matt and Noah.
I am really liking this storey, you have painted the world so nicely. the flow of the storey and characters are spot on good work.
Ok yay for the new chapter....and yay that they told each other their feelings. Grr for the lycans agreeing to go to war but. Cheers :D
I'd like to see you clear up age. Matt seems he has been a vamp for a long time, obviously older than he looks. He refers to Noah as a boy...how old is Noah? I can't really tell...he seems to be mid twenties in the way he acts but seems a bit innocent at times too. I love the laying eggs thing...nice to switch stuff up from the typical lore. I loved how they communicated during the fight. How they ended up helping one another after starting as enemies. Well-done. I look forward to more but I can't see where it can go other than a witch hunt for Matt since the other vamps left.
AND do go back to Mike and Tony..finally got used to them lol now i want to see what happens
Like your story but donĀ“t like the idea of war between the races, especially as I like both werewolves/Lycans and Vampires as well. As this is more of a romance you should try to find an elegant solution and let them at least make a truce.
i love this story and i read also the mike and tony story and ive read your other stories too...youre one of my favorites writers on this site if not the best...cant wait for the next installement of both stories our working on...keep up the good work
Keep writing because it's going good so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Pleasant read, but why make the lycans reproduce by laying eggs? It doesn't fit with what we know of evolution and biology. The reader has no problem accommodating the concept of lycans, werewolves and vampires as additional species on planet earth, but the biology and behaviour of these species needs to be consistent with what we know would be "logical", were these species to exist.