All Comments on 'Oral Fixation'

Who doesn't enjoy reading about an enthusiastic cocksucker?

Great read!

Good writing is about writing whatever you want and if how much I enjoyed this is anything to go by, you really wanted that.

It's just from HER perspective. His perspective? How did it feel to him (Yeah, I know he groaned, so he must have liked it)????? Had he been anticipating this bj all day? Had he experienced it before? What was it -- particularly -- that he liked about her bj's? What mad them better than other bj's?

Dialogue? No "Do you like that?" No "Should I do it more?"

What did he do during the bj? Just lie there like a lump and moan a bit?

What foreplay had been involved before the bj? How long did it go on? Who did what to whom? How did she look? How did she feel? Etc......

I gave it 3-stars for potential.

Very well written and undeniably HOT!

Reminded me of a lover I used to have - definitely obvious that you are a VERY hungry gobbler!!

Great work, what's coming next?

You should teach lessons and writing should be the second one.