All Comments on 'Orbital Academy 14'

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jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenabout 10 years ago
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Magic shinys!! And dye jobs

NW_bi_boyNW_bi_boyabout 10 years ago
Shortness is frustrating

When these are less than two full online pages, it really does get frustrating.

I like the story but dislike the delivery style.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I agree with NW's comment

I'm very much enjoying the story. But when half of one page is taken up with incredibly hot sex there isn't much left of actual story line with only a total of 1.5 pages. I would rather wait a bit longer for 2 or 3 full pages.

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