All Comments on 'Orbital Academy 18'

by Maddirose

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great story

I love this story, it is so interesting.

You have progressed the story so well that it doesn't really need the sex any more!! Cant wait for the next installment.

Dry_opinionDry_opinionabout 10 years ago
Tiny request

Sometimes hard to follow with so many characters in the picture. Will appreciate the list of all characters at the top of chapters. Thanks.

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenabout 10 years ago
Oh... that poor pair

Even if they wake up enough, they still need to rescue her body.

flashman58flashman58about 10 years ago
Awesome

Loved the chapter, and really looking forward to the next one. Keep it up Maddirose

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