All Comments on 'Orc Dominion: Rebellion Ch. 02'

Ok I know I was harsh on the beginning chapter and maybe unjustly but in my defence on the surface it read as 'Old' and 'Predictable.' Now this chapter has proven me wrong, sure the initial tie in felt a little simple, but this one has intrigue, action, conflict, and sex - with a vision to a future yet to be read. The other piece that I forever grateful for is a SUBPLOT! Oh My God, there's a subplot. We have secondary characters, even tertiary characters with roles and plot developments, everything you want in a true novella. I'm not talking War and Peace here but at least we've got more than See Dick, See Dick run, See Jane, See Jane run, See Jane run up to Dick and suck his cock.

Bottom Line FIVE STARS *****

I am glad that you continued with your stories.

And I realy like this one. You nicely addressed the issues from the previous chapter.

I am realy looking forward to ne next installments