by stud_hunter
The fact that you know what you need to enjoy yourself and get your satisfaction is a great story, including wearing the condom. Safe sex always should be center stage during these times of uncertain sexual transmitted diseases. Your words are discriptive and you're able to put your imagination on paper. You write well. Thanks
if it's fiction leave the condom out. women loves the way cum fills their insides. you wrote this besfore using a different place, but same action and descriptions.
I'm constantly looking for a story that doesn't rely on profanity or impossibilities (like, say, two-hour sex). This fit the bill perfectly- aside from a bit of talking dirty, which is definitely hot in moderation, there was no swearing- and best of all, no abuse of capital letters. Guys like that are hard to find, but not impossible, so it was hot while being realistic. and finally, I loved the condom bit. We need more realism in porn or it becomes boring and uniform, and so I love to read/see a condom in this sort of thing. Well done!