by fagboy19
nice litt;e twist you added here, im waiting for more devon and wes though ;)
I love the new development...very hot prospects. Please hurry with the next chapter!!!
I LOVED the first episode, LOVED. But Wes NEEDS to recover so that he can sort out the relationship with Devon and Cameron. (but this new one was fucking hot.)Annnd there needs to be some more hot sex between Devon and Wes. Clearly. Congrats on some fucking HOT stories! ;)
I'm a little saddened to see that it's been almost two years since your last submission. Chances are you won't be continuing this story, which is a shame. You write well.
I would also like to compliment you on the twist at the end of this chapter. I was not expecting it! Cameron seemed like such a nice guy, who knew he was such a dick.
fantastic start! would love to read the rest, you have me hooked on the characters and the story line. Please post the next parts as soon as possible.
Are you going to leave it like this? I would love to read the ending. I love your characters. The twists and the love triangle create a nice plot. Your writing is beyond that of an 18 year old.
I can't rate 100, b/c you can't leave it like this. I would love to read more in this story!!!
Would be happy to rate 100 if I could get more!!!!
you deff need to write more.... i have a huge fetish for gay guys.... it was amazing but u need to finish it.... please? if u need ideas email me at blackrosepedals2@aim.com
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPLOAD MORE!!!! I NEEDS MORE!!!!! THIS SHOCKED ME CAMERAN IS SUCH AN ASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE HIM!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE
Why you stop writing? did wes die ?Damm i know we trek fans LOATH wesley butbthis one seemed fine....Come on we need more!
Please continue this story. I'm guessing you don't get on here anymore, but a guy can dream :)