All Comments on 'Original Sin Ch. 02'

by Karolina

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Finally an update!

At last! Something new and engaging! Pls continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
superb

WOW!!! 1st chapter is great but this one is superb!! The conflicts, both interior, and between characters, such intensity... I'm so excited to see what is coming next. Thanks

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayover 18 years ago
Please....

hurry with the next submission, this one is on fire and i can't wait to see whats next and hopefully see that cousin bitch get hers, finally...you have the ability to make this one a good long story with lots of great stuff going on....I do hope you don't make us wait long. respectfully a fan in Texas

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

Too much violence to earn 5. But the intrigue gets you a 4.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous