All Comments on 'Our Holiday with the Pornstars'

by Billshaw1982

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
STUPID and DESPERATE AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!!!

resubmitted the SAME EXACT story as "Help! I Married A Pornstar" HOW desperate for attention and feedback can someone get?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

one one the dumber stories I have ever read

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice story! But should have changed from your other story

Would be nice to build on this line. But you should not duplicate stories. Seems you have done that twice. In addition, Jessica should have teased Bill but not sucked him off or kissed him... would be more erotic if Jessica went and joined Anne and Steve for a threesome, but Bill only watched

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Why did you repost this garbage?

Just plain bad. Enough said.

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