All Comments on 'Our Unholy Church'

AND, you need to learn how to spell!

It's always a great idea to start with a spelling mistake in your first sentence.

(Learn the difference between 'lose' and 'loose'.)

Then try looking up all the other mistakes.

This is truly awful writing.

This was a great story. A very hot tail of a hot woman enjoying the pleasures to be hand. Stroked a few times while reading. Looking forward to your next story

Scotty

P.S. For the grammer freaks. Suggest they lighten up or they may want to enrole in a grammer and spelling class so they can enjoy the company of othersw who are perfect.

It was a fun story to read. Even with a few errors the idea was crystal clear and a real turn on. Keep at it.

Please continue...PLEASE!!!!

One helluva story! Although this author has not chosen to share many stories on Literotica, it's obvious that she can write!

Super Super erotic story...I didn't want it to end...wanted her to enjoy that black meat...great excitement... enjoyed everything except that Denny never told her what was going on

... a wife or a husband bf..gf..whomever.. deserves to be told .. secrets destroy a relationship. .otherwise 5 stars