All Comments on 'Our Vanilla Friend'

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Callie8Callie8over 16 years ago
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The story concept is pretty good... but I felt like you were in a rush to get to the sex part (not that that's always a bad thing :)What I mean is I want to know what they all look like, what are the surroundings... I felt like I was reading a manual...

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