All Comments on 'Out of Control Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I'm so glad to see this update

It's been a long time but worth the wait. I think this is one of the first stories I read on this site that really captured me. It remains one of my favorites to this day. So glad to read more about Kitten and her "Daddy." I hope the next update will be here soon!

MistressMerryMistressMerryover 16 years ago
Excellent addition!

Once again you have brought us another excellent addition to your wonderful story. I will look forward to each.

SynclineSynclineover 16 years ago
wonderful

Oh, this story just gets better all the time.

There isn't enough love among the passion on lit.

Kitten however, keeps doing her part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good story but need polishing

You changed from third person to first person telling the story so it was confusing. The story is basically good but you need an editor so that your writing can be polished.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Awesome!

you are truly gifted! this has now become my most favorite of all time! thank you so much!!!

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