by Kitten20057
It's been a long time but worth the wait. I think this is one of the first stories I read on this site that really captured me. It remains one of my favorites to this day. So glad to read more about Kitten and her "Daddy." I hope the next update will be here soon!
Once again you have brought us another excellent addition to your wonderful story. I will look forward to each.
Oh, this story just gets better all the time.
There isn't enough love among the passion on lit.
Kitten however, keeps doing her part.
You changed from third person to first person telling the story so it was confusing. The story is basically good but you need an editor so that your writing can be polished.
you are truly gifted! this has now become my most favorite of all time! thank you so much!!!