All Comments on 'Out of Control Ch. 07'

Hope you have them finally getting married - Tired of waiting! Still good story.

Marcus better tell her he loves her too, pronto, or I have a feeling that Kitten will walk out on her daddy. I can't believe he didn't say it back! Because that man is gone, G-O-N-E, GONE! If he thinks he's not head over heels, he's crazy.

Very, very hot stuff, m'dear.

Still waiting for the other shoe to drop at work.

Very, very hot stuff, m'dear.

Still waiting for the other shoe to drop at work.

I found one sentence that was sort of jarring:<br><br>

<i>She was beautiful awake but there are always seemed to be something that was taken away from that. Maybe it was the fact that she opened her mouth and nothing but evil spewed forth, but what ever it was, it made her seem something less.</i><br><br>

That made me feel sad. "Nothing but evil" spews from her mouth when she is awake? Does he really feel that way? <br><br>

I have been following this series from the beginning - and it's very good and hot. I like the fact that you share both of their thoughts with the reader.

The only thing I can really say is that this series has become my personal fave and I will most definitely have to show this whole thing to my boyfriend...it's almost as if you were writing about me! Keep up the fantastic work and please add more to this!

Puggy's Kitten

Just beautiful! Love them all. ^^'

nothing but a sick rape story written by a sick ass hole that should be ashamed to be called a woman any woman that would write such crap should be put in a insane assylum

Have read the entire series and loved every part.....I hope you plan on continuing your writing. I love the fact that you write from both points of view. This was very very hot thanks

this is one of the best erotic series i have ever read in my FREAKEN LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!Please do me a HUGE faver and continue this AMAZING series:)!!!!!!!!!!!

I think your writing is great!! PLEASE DON'T LISTEN TO THAT CLOSED MINDED ASS THAT WROTE RAPE!! Please write the next chapter for your true fans, that have been asking for MORE! Thank you for sharing your story and a part of yourself!!

You write very well but when you change Kitten from being talked to and then telling the story, it's very confusing. You need to get an editor to check your grammar and make your story flow easier.

Hi

I just wanted to let you know I love this story and hope you write more about this great couple. I would love to see where you go with this story.

Lo

Pleasseeeee omg you have to continue this series I absolutely ADORE it!! You can't leave it like this. I have only found one other story on this entire site that I repeatedly come back to read and even that one is 10 steps below this series. Please please please

Oh my you can't just stop here! Please continue the story.

I love your Out of Control series. It is totally amazing and just wonderful. Please please continue writing. It's just so amazing.

I absolutely loved your story. Wonderful starting point for a really good kinky tale but it went more towards an erotic romance that's always a winner in my book.

I am very picky but I couldn't take my eyes away from the text. You are an excellent writer and very descriptive. Please keep writing more of this story. I can't wait. And for that person who said Quote:

"rape

05/15/08 by Anonymous

nothing but a sick rape story written by a sick ass hole that should be ashamed to be called a woman any woman that would write such crap should be put in a insane assylum"

ignore it and I hope you keep showing us all bits of your wild side that we all secretly wish to explore in ourselves. Keep it up girl!

Last time i looked "rape" was defined as an unwanted act of sex - if you think Kitten didn't want it to happen which story were you reading? There is a mile of difference between rape and consensual role play - open your eyes and mind!

This story was off the hook.Had me freaking wet the entire series. PLEASE WRTIE MORE. Don't think daddy will be happy with you ending so soon.:)

please continue. one of the best storylines in this website

I started reading your story last night on my BB, I could not put it down. I loved it. Disappointed there isn't more. Please cont.

I have totally fallen in love with this series and I hope you decide to keep writing. Please please please!

I really enjoyed reading this short

story. The only problem I found was

that I wanted it to continue. Thank

You for writing this...looking forward

To reading the rest !

The story is getting better by the chapter! But what happens between Marcus and Amie? Does he return his love for her or let her go?

I still hope you will continue this story! It's so intensely erotic AND heartachingly romantic... so difficult to pull off and you did it! Please, please, please keep writing. Thank you!!!