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Click hereAlmost as if he heard my thoughts, he locked eyes with me. I couldn't look away as he started that corkscrew motion that he knew would send me roaring over the edge. I didn't disappoint, screaming out as I came on his cock. I never took my eyes off him as he arched into me, emptying his cum into my waiting body.
Our breathing settled together as he pulled himself from me, and lay beside me. He pulled me into his arms and kissed my forehead. I waited for him to broach the elephant in the room but he didn't. He simply ran his hand up and down my spine as he untied me before pulling me against his side. After the things we'd done the last few hours, I was exhausted and settled into sleep.
I still hope you will continue this story! It's so intensely erotic AND heartachingly romantic... so difficult to pull off and you did it! Please, please, please keep writing. Thank you!!!
The story is getting better by the chapter! But what happens between Marcus and Amie? Does he return his love for her or let her go?
I really enjoyed reading this short
story. The only problem I found was
that I wanted it to continue. Thank
You for writing this...looking forward
To reading the rest !
I have totally fallen in love with this series and I hope you decide to keep writing. Please please please!
I started reading your story last night on my BB, I could not put it down. I loved it. Disappointed there isn't more. Please cont.
please continue. one of the best storylines in this website
This story was off the hook.Had me freaking wet the entire series. PLEASE WRTIE MORE. Don't think daddy will be happy with you ending so soon.:)
Last time i looked "rape" was defined as an unwanted act of sex - if you think Kitten didn't want it to happen which story were you reading? There is a mile of difference between rape and consensual role play - open your eyes and mind!
I am very picky but I couldn't take my eyes away from the text. You are an excellent writer and very descriptive. Please keep writing more of this story. I can't wait. And for that person who said Quote:
"rape
05/15/08 by Anonymous
nothing but a sick rape story written by a sick ass hole that should be ashamed to be called a woman any woman that would write such crap should be put in a insane assylum"
ignore it and I hope you keep showing us all bits of your wild side that we all secretly wish to explore in ourselves. Keep it up girl!
I absolutely loved your story. Wonderful starting point for a really good kinky tale but it went more towards an erotic romance that's always a winner in my book.
I love your Out of Control series. It is totally amazing and just wonderful. Please please continue writing. It's just so amazing.
Oh my you can't just stop here! Please continue the story.
Pleasseeeee omg you have to continue this series I absolutely ADORE it!! You can't leave it like this. I have only found one other story on this entire site that I repeatedly come back to read and even that one is 10 steps below this series. Please please please
Hi
I just wanted to let you know I love this story and hope you write more about this great couple. I would love to see where you go with this story.
Lo
You write very well but when you change Kitten from being talked to and then telling the story, it's very confusing. You need to get an editor to check your grammar and make your story flow easier.