by darktwin
A good story includes the reader's suspension of belief. Yes, it's fiction, but blatant impossibilities just plain suck. Paragraph 2, in which Jessica cuffs her wrists with her hands around a metal pole against her back is believable, but the rest of the paragraph is pure rubbish. Playing with the key in the manner described ruins the entire story. Blah.
I don't normally read these types of stories but it was well written and very sexy.
This is one hot story. The idea of getting into an extremely compromising situation and having to let a "stranger" let you loose is a real turn on. I hope we hear more about this couple.