by Anna_Malia75
My one complaint: You need to tone down the cursing. It can get annoying.
Nice work for an early submission. I have been writing out here for quite a while and have my own "Christmas-Related" series [ two of 'em ] but I'd guide any reader to yours for a HoHoHo!
That was a fucked up thing for Sam to do, but it was still hot. Wish there had been more between the two of them though.
It felt a bit unfinished to me, like Samantha and Rachel could have done so much more together and spent more time together pleasuring each other, it finished rather suddenly I thought sorry
You tricked me, Anna, naughty girl. That clever twist came just in the "nick" of time. I look forward to reading more from you.
Well done Anna. Well done, indeed. I really enjoyed the intense sexual chemistry between Samantha and Rachel. Keep the stories coming and I will be coming back for more.
A nice blend of sensuality and humor. I hope to see more submissions from you.
Nice mix of humor and fantasy! Very well written too! Can't wait to read more!
Love it when the stories include humor....and this is very, very clever! Good job.