All Comments on 'Out of the Darkness'

Well written.

Excellent read, you did extremely well with the theme and it could have been even a little longer or is there a Chapter 2 in the future? Thanks.

Good story. I hope you'll continue it and explore the relationship in much greater detail. Thanks.

Fantastic ! Hot !! More please from these two and you don't need to add anyone else .

That was another great story that you wrote. I like how you described the son and the mother getting together first in his bedroom then after the bar on the grass. You could write another chapter to the story. How you keep on writing these great stories?

PLEASE stop leaving the exact same retarded comment, following every single story you read! Your stupid comments are seriously 'tarding up this place.<p>

Quit saying, "This is another great story that you wrote..."<p>

"That you wrote" is just plain retarded. Stop saying it. We know he wrote it. It's a story, on Literotica. How else would it have gotten there?? In what other form would it appear? He WROTE IT! All stories on Lit are written, you don't need to point out that the guy wrote it.<p>

It makes you sound completely stupid.<p>

You also need to quit re-capping each story with your stupid crap about, "I like how you had the brother and sister have SEX!"<p>

No shit, moron. That IS the point of the story. It's a fuck story, on Liteoritca. Yes, they had sex.<p>

You're supposed to tell the author WHY you liked it. Specifically, was the scene well written? Was it unique? Was the plot interesting, and if so, why?<p>

Give REASONS for you comments.<p>

You don't just say, "That was a great story that you wrote, about <fill in the blank> fucking. I like that you had <fill in the blank> fucking."<p>

Then, at the end of every comment you make, you add this: "I hope you write another great chapter!"<p>

Are you just an automated BOT program which spews out the same stupid response to every story, with only the (always misspelled) names changed, from one story to the next? You never even get the damn names correct. You always butcher them, too.<p>

Just stop commenting on stories. Read. Just read. Don't comment. Your stupid comments are an utter embarrassment to Literotica.<p>

As for the story itself, it was a decent effort. It was a little rushed in places, and you certainly could've built up the tension better; after the open robe scene in the kitchen, leading up to the initial blowjob scene, and especially once the mom came to visit the son at school. There was a ton of potential there, and I did enjoy the story anyway, but you moved through things too quickly, without giving us enough teasing heat.

The story started well and I think the plot could have developed with some more sex earlier, rather than waiting until his mother moved back to his college digs. From there the story was rushed and could have done without the forced sex. I am sure she was willing to develop the relationship if you had written another chapter rather than rushing to finish this one. Still, a good effort, thanks.

I realy enjoyed this! It's well written, vividm exciting, and interesting! I hope it continues?

I realy enjoyed this! It's well written, vividm exciting, and interesting! I hope it continues?

FANTASTIC HOT STORY OUT OF THE DARKNESS.

DO HOPE FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER WITH EVEN MORE PASSION

AND LOVE.

I love this story.

I think the build up was excellent, the sex very hot, the story believable.

I can't wait for the next chapter(s).

Thank you,

Norman

Anonymous05/22/09, You badger this poor guy because he says the same thing on other posts??? Are you a stalker or just a half wit asshole who got his ass fucked by his Step-dad? GET A LIFE ASSHOLE!!

and prolific young lady author. South beach babe sure understands why so many boys, like 19 year old Ryan, lust after their mother's mommy-hole, that wonderful hole between their mother's legs that gave them birth. Ms. babe also knows why plenty of mothers are so drawn to their boy's big young prick. Not only because a mother loves her darling baby boy to pieces, but also because she's sex-savvy. She realizes that her boy's big prick is the stiffest one around and that his hot young balls never quit--they keep on producing the great big doses of creamy semen that's so soothing and exciting for her motherly cunt. I love how after Ryan fucks the shit out of his mom, mother and son kiss, with his fat prick still buried in her cunt.

Keep the story cumming!

Your story is both so sensual and beautiful. Loved her surrender. More!