All Comments on 'Out Of The Mouths Of Drunks'

Ok story thats decently written. The husbands reaction and results of it explains a lot about him. He was a weak human being that gave up instead of reacting like a man. It kind of explains why the wife ended up cheating on him,she lost respect for him...3 stars..No I do not condone her actions but understand them..respect is vital to maintain a strong marriage...

Weak.

Brutal

5 Stars as I heard my cousin's wife tell him the same thing . My cousin dealt with it , my Brother beat the guy up . He was shunned at all events after that . We are not even Mormon's

A little of this made any sense.

Damn... that was a dark tale. Well written and brutal right to the end. 5/5

I could see that ending being real.

He just sat and thought about whether his whole marriage was a lie or not.

He would probably have been thinking and getting deeper into his own mind about his wife, and life, and not moved or eaten, and the longer he didn't eat, the worse he would feel, as a spiral of gloom.

He didn't eat, maybe he wanted to die, or it was just a side effect of the mental shock

A few people have put the husband down for taking his own life, another for sitting and doing nothing.

When the neighbor went to check on him he was still sitting where he was when he told his wife to go stay at her sisters and the Doctor told the cheating wife he thought he might have had a breakdown or even a stroke, (which sounds more likely) and that he had not moved for a few days (while he was in hospital) then he had a heart attack.

It didn't seem that the other cheater Bill paid much for his part in the affair.

BUT considering he was the only one who got concerned that Steve hadn't been seen or heard from Since the party and went to check on someone who he had considered a friend, maybe living with the guilt that his and Steve's wife's affair had caused Steve to die might be a bigger punishment than anyone else could deliver

5 for the writing. Ended kind of fast but I liked it enough to boost it a bit

too funny! lol pig stories are my favorite

Good enough, will she take the pills?

One can only hope.

4/5

Story was well written. I didn't like any of the developments except the twins reaction. I realize that incidents happen like this in real life, however It always pains me when the wrong person dies. Served with a guy who killed himself over a cheater. Might sound wrong but I took solace in the fact that he killed her first. Np spouse should be that integral in your life to off yourself... Again well written story.

Yes, sadly, such things really do occur. A well written fictional example here. And I would bet the close family of the widow would not speak to her again. I would not. The affective tone of the cheating wife was fundamentally one of deceit. If their sex life was so boring, she should have communicated that with him so they could have worked on it. My limited access to married friends suggests this is actually often true. But it has to start when the marriage is young before baggage gets in the way. Her lack of honesty and actions indicate their marriage was probably never what he thought it was. So yeah, DNA test the children, and see a family law attorney. Not much else to do as such longterm dishonesty really cannot be fixed since her attitudes would not change.

5 Stars on a Great Story . My Cousin caught his loving wife having sex in their Bed . He then picked up a Baseball bat and hit the Boy Toy a lot of times sadly one of the blows hit his ex wife to be . The neighbors had called the police and as usual over reacted . Al did get enough money from the police to pay for his injuries . Seems the cops went crazy on him . I thank the neighbor for taking video of it . It was settled out of court . This happened 1o years ago and he still does not date . Told me he doesn't trust women so why waste the time

Well at least it wasn’t an RAAC story.

Well, that took a turn

It's pity why Bill should act high and mighty after cheating on his wife and backstabbing best friend. With friends like him who needs enemies the old adage. No punishment for him takes two to tango

I wanted to know

Did the pills work and did she drift in Purgatory by herself forever

To Me a Cluck is some guy who knows his wife is cheating on him but doesn't care .. If I did not know my ex was cheating Me I would thank my friends for not telling me the Rat Bastards. I did tell my ex's best friends husband that she was cheating on him . Guess what he divorced her skanky ass

Ignore my other post on your other story. You are pro weak willed husband and I'm not.

0 *

5 stars. I didn't like it but that was probably the point, a sad depressing story of loss caused by a greedy cheating woman who loved herself more then anyone else. Much as I love stories with happy endings its cathartic to read the occasional bad end that unfortunately may be more realistic.

The husband just got what he deserved! What a wimp! She openly embarrassed him and told him that he wa as cuckold! And what does he do! Like a typical Englishman...he keeps a stiff upper lip ... does nothing to the two assholes...and slows himself to wither away!! Best to get suck simps out of the gene pool! The only good part of the story was both die! Only bill is left to rot!

sounds terrible,but the cheating bitch got lucky to get rid of the wimp..I am one of those that truly believe there is absolutely NO exceptable excuse for infidelity, but I can understand and except a women losing respect for a wimpy husband. After she debases him,he takes her arm and says "we better get you home"??? Are you brain dead to expect a reader to believe that.??? Real life either Bill or Steve would not have been able to walk away from the party. Without a doubt the wife would not have been taken home by the husband. A man/husband would not take his own life but get his head together and start to make plans necessary to move on.

I gave it 4 stars for the strength of the writing & story telling. Otherwise, I disliked this story (yeah, I'm separating the 2 views) as the wife's a total bitch. Instead of talking to her husband, trying to show him how to improve, what she likes, etc., she goes to another man... his good friend, no less! Even worse that this's based on a true story. I'm sure most of these stories reflect the shit-assed morality of many "adults". Just a shame..

A sad, but very real possible outcome that is rarely addressed. Kudos to you for this story ... I'm sure many of us can relate. 5/5

"Why had she drunk so much of that homemade wine?" - Never mind why she drank so much, why did she cheat? Besides the reason she gave, of course! And just how did she know that Bill could fuck that well?

Good work. Didn't flinch from the awful event that started it up, kept right on going. I've wondered sometimes about the idea that when we die we "get" to be around people we knew in life. I don't want to see some of those people ever again, including at least two member from my family of origin. Is there a provision for not seeing people you don't want to see? Also, I've wondered: can we meet new people in the afterlife and have relationships with them? Big questions.

Isn't getting a reaction from readers what it's all about. I wish I had your talent.

I see where marvel got their idea from

Sandra should go ahead and take those sleeping pills. But, she won't be able to find Steve and apologize, in the place of eternal damnation she'll find.

this story certainly stirred some people up. 😎

Something to ponder, what this guy said!

(Anonymous2 months ago

The downfall of Western Civilization! In a proper society he would have pulled his gun (everyone is armed) and put them both down like rabid dogs. Then all the neighbors would applaud him for removing the cancer from their town. - ZK)

There was a valid reason behind people being stoned for adulterous (and other bad) behaviors outside the city gates. Everyone knew the consequences of bad behavior. The threat of divorce for such today does nothing to stem the ill tide of human misconduct. According to the myriad of stories on this very website, most cheaters will simply end a long relationship and continue on as if nothing ever happened. With the wife keeping the majority of the assets. And no, BTB stories are not realistic or even account for the actual end results of most divorces.

quite liked it. even the tragic ending. just didn't like that the other guy got off only with a guilty conscience.

Was great until you went with the morbid ending

So why kill herself? She gets the house, lit insurance money, no divorce, she even gets Bill if she tries.

Only wish that somehow the daughters were able to make certain that the cheating wife would not be laid to rest beside the husband and also hopefully before he passed out he somehow had her off the life insurance. I know, asking too much.

The downfall of Western Civilization! In a proper society he would have pulled his gun (everyone is armed) and put them both down like rabid dogs. Then all the neighbors would applaud him for removing the cancer from their town.

ZK

Good story. Thanks for the read.

Hope the daughters never speak or see her ever again and that the wife has a long miserable lonely life.

This is better every time I read it. I don't like it, even a little bit. But I appreciate it as great writing about a cheating bitch of a wife, and the destruction she causes.

She drank so much rum that she threw up before the sleeping pills could actually do the deed.

She live the rest of her life a lonely woman who had killed her one true love.

When she eventually passed over Steve was waiting for her. As she approached him, with arms opened wide, he turned around and walked away from her as the trapdoor to hell opened and she plummeted down.

Every time I read this story I like it even more. I've been around drunks and I've been around cheaters. Boy, there is some nasty truth here. Great job!

that the drunken woman concerned was boasting about on the Doc Cool site, which was a site cheaters used to brag about their cheating. I hope her husband dumped her.

Actually you did a good job with this one. I could only give you three stars because of the plot, or gist of the story. I can see how someone could get so drunk they could do something like this.

This story was as enjoyable as a bad case of the flu!

I liked it even more. I do believe that many cheaters complain they aren't getting enough from their marriage when, in fact, they aren't giving enough to it. Pity she learned too late.

Not usually a fan of a story that incorporates death in the punishment, but this works. ;0)

Really dark story. Hope she does take the pills, and then finds that she and Steve have different accommodations.

A very dramatic short story! They say you can die of a broken heart and that evil cunt just destroyed her husband's sense of self worth with her thoughtless words. He went from happy to devastated in the blink of an eye... tragic.

It was a colleague at work who told myself and the Managing Director that his wife ran her own website. The MD thought it was going to be a knitting site, I thought perhaps a cookery blog.

We were both wrong. His wife turned out to be a very well-endowed blond who ran a cuckolding site. And he was proud to be her cuckold.

Weird.

does anyone actually say "I'm a cuckold" or "you made me into a cuckold" ? Outside of fiction I've never heard it used, People just say "cheated on" or "had an affair"

Just a mini-rant, but it always just makes these stories more unrealistic for me.

In reply to Anon (Cuckers, Buckers, Cluckers N Plain Ol' F#@$ckers) I see you might benefit from being introduced to a few Englishmen I know who could certainly put you straight.. Yankee old boy! As this story was reputed to be of US origin ( which sounds way more likely) I am tempted to believe it and ask what do they run through all those old lead pipes in the USA? And, for your information, London has VERY FEW Englishmen left there it is filled with immigrants and lefty liberal millenials who use such terms as (Cuckers, Buckers, Cluckers N Plain Ol' F#@$ckers)

The truthful basis for this story (which came from America, I think) was a proud boast on a cheater's forum that the conversation that was the basis for my story had actually taken place, but she had managed to convince her husband the next morning that she had only been joking with him. I thought: "What if he didn't believe you?" And I wrote "Outr of the mouths of Drunks."

Hard not to see this as symptomatic of English decline. Men withering and simpering. Do they put more chemicals in London water than we do here in the states? Ever since reading Back To Bristol (I call it Back To Bullshit) I knew there might be something wrong with Englishmen.

People in the modern day need to redefine themselves and their national purpose, give themselves new ideas and goals (yes, I realize that's becoming illegal). I hardly think that should include wilting like a picked posey when another man is after your own wife - or even enjoying it (that crap needs another fetish category around here).

Yes, this woman flat out cheated on her marriage and all but killed her husband with her own hands. But it takes two to tango and who knows how soft and faggy her guy became. In case you haven't figured it out: no matter what anyone says, that's a real turnoff to most all women.

The author says hubby had become "complacent".

One common thread in these stories are men rushing to get drunk when marital issues come up. Also, they like to sit around and watch TV. Especially nutless news programs and the worst of all: Sports.

Is there any greater sign of total capitulation to mediocrity in every possible way than being a fat fck beer drinking TV watcher? And watching sports with your wrenching guffaws and jiggling bellies? And not a single original thought in your mind?

Life is for keeps and no one gets out alive. If men have capitulated to these state sponsored phantasms and become couch potatoes afraid of their own shadow then you can understand wifey going out for a good round of fcking.

Sorry. Pound the table all you want. Beat your bible, on and on. But your wives will never tell you the truth of your shortcomings, until perhaps desperation sets in and it has become too late. They're simply not cut out for it.

Keep your game up, men. Look alive, don't let your guard down. Gods honest you will never get an ounce of respect becoming a blubbering couch walrus with zero fight left.

I am something of an anglophile but you people sure don't make it easy.

I like the website: Cambria Will Not Yield.

Yup mutually assured destruction is probably close to the truth for many in RL. We are very good at it as a speices.

She had to live with her choices. always making the male into a hapless broken and pathetic cuckold is a bit distasteful though.

Very dark, sad story about a side effect of cheating that isn't often shown. The shock of finding out your wife is cheating on front of your friends just might cause a shock like this. I enjoy your writing, and you definitely got the commenters stirred up. Must have hit some emotional chord with them.

Getting blind sided like that is going to knock anyone off their feet. A stroke, a mental breakdown, or homicide become rather believable and this was a change from the usual story line in LW. I liked it for that reason. It really is a pity that the fuck buddy actually was a better friend to him than his own wife. Very cold, but that made it interesting.

Here's why...

* He should have rejected her the moment it became clear of what she thought of him. He's not worth mich in bed? She's not worth shit as a wife

* She was a cold-hearted bitch who deserves her misery. Were we suppose to sympathize with her after Steve's death? Fuck whorezilla. I don't give a fuck about how she feels

* It's a shame Steve really didn't "man up" and go on with his life. There'd pain, then there's the fact that the woman you've loved for so long was nothing but a lying, cheating slut. Why the fuck are you wasting away over her? Divorce the cunt, have a heart-to-heart with your daughters and find someone whose hole hasn't been stretched out by (clearly, even though she denies it,) several dozen cocks. Come on; if she was dissatisfied for, what? twenty fucking years, she's not gonna go fuck around?

* And yes, get the fucking DNA test, AND an STD test. This whore has lied to you for twenty fucking years. How can you believe ANYTHING that comes out of that cum dumpster in the middle of her face?

Disappointing story. He didn't even need to burn the bitch - throw her the fuck out, grown a fucking pair and move the fuck on!

Again - 1*

It was clear, after the guy had been crying all night,

that he wasn't going to "man up".

That leaves few choices.

Tim Robbins said it best:

"Get busy living or get busy dying".

The story was good, except

it lacked a lot of background.

4 out of 5 from me.

Sad that the husband died.

But the self realization of the wife over the consequences of what she did was nicely done.

And the self recrimanation will last the rest of her life even if she shortens it.

Thx.

What was in the wine? Probably grated nutmeg. Very dangerous stuff when added to homebrew.

Was in the Goon ((Australian Plonk) Maybe it's better than Sodium Pentathol (can't spell) The Story was ok but not Brilliant 4★ WOOF!

Read it again. Fucking low-life cheating cunt. With the best friend who was also a neighbor. Take the pills, cunt. You won't find him because you're going in the fire and your husband is in the light.

Yeah I know it's fiction. Sometimes it really pisses me off.

"I don't like to think of what I was doing was making you into a cuckold." - Who the fuck cares what you LIKE to think what you were doing? That IS what you were doing!

Her sister fucking knew about it? I can understand not wanting to narc on your sister, but as soon as she knew, if she doesn't tell her to stop or she WILL tell her husband, then she's no better than her sister. In fact, she's even worse! Her sister at least has her reasons, as fucked up as they may be, but what's HER excuse besides, "She's my sister?" If Molly was married and her husband was cheating, would she accept his brother keeping quiet about it? What diff does Bill's job make? Would it be okay if he was a CEO, or a lawyer or a surgeon?!

Sandra had an excuse, as shitty as it was. What was Bill's excuse besides being a dog that would fuck any pussy that wasn't nailed down, even if she was married to a friend?

Why the need to describe the doctor's skin? His name and accent will tell us his race well enough!

He should have lived and she should have died, though it looks like the second part may yet happen!

That is all.

This is terrible.

Not only has she driven him to his death - she is planning to go after him in the after life.

There's one consolation though. Over 150,000 people die each day and she is several days behind - so there are several 100,000 souls in front of her and she doesn't know what direction he took - or if you all start from the same entry point.

Always assuming you are able to move in the afterlife. Also she could very well find herself in a warmer climate.

It would need to be a very big place to accommodate all the dead from the last 2 million years,

BTW why have the snip if her tubes are being tied?

Well, you raised some hackles with this. To me that's a sign of emotional involvement with the story. Takes some guts to write a story you know a lot of people will hate.

When your wife brags to 15 couples of your best friends that a very close friend of yours has been fucking her for six months; that you are lousy in bed; but your friend is terrific; that she has no intention of stopping; and that you should come watch them fuck so you will have, at least, an idea of how your wife has grown accustomed to being fucked...then maybe you can get away with calling yourself a wimp. Until then, shut the fuck up. You are an embarrassment. Great, albeit a tragic, story.

She is a slut and he is a wimp!!! For them its not a shame !!!

It was good no FANTASTIC STORY WITH A MESSAGE A DRUNK ALWAYS SPEAKS WHAT IS ON THEIR MIND? Love you all! GREG.

OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

JOKE! WOMEN SITTING A WAITING ROOM TO SEE THE DOCTORS IN REGARDS

TO THEIR PREGNANCIES !

1st WOMAN SAYS PROUDLY I AM GOING TO HAVE A BOY BECAUSE I CONCIEVED WHILE MY HUSBAND WAS ON TOP OF ME!

2nd WOMAN SAYS I AM GOING TO HAVE A GIRL BECAUSE I WAS ON TOP WHEN I CONCIEVED

3rd GIRL SUDDENLY JUMPS UP SCREAMING AND RUNNING TOWARDS THE DOOR OF THE SURGERY OH NO IAM GOING TO HAVE A BABY DOG

All cheaters are as self centered as the bitch here.

MattblackUK is to writing, as Benny Hill was to high drama.

The story was like a nice present wrapped in plane brown wrapper and tied with string. Perhaps some one could write an alternate ending? Or a prequil?

Just a dark piece of shite story.

On the plus side it was short.

I liked it, it wasn't based on sex but it was something that happens a lot

Go learn to spell and some basic English then come back and attempt to look intelligent. Idiot cum guzzler.

I do have a problem with her committing suicide. She now shows she is a coward, she basically doesn't think of her daughters who will need her, irregardless in a few years, and she gets off Scott free. She should live a long and healthy life, so she can reflect upon her actions and suffer daily with not only her family's recriminations but even worse, her own as well!

I wonder why people like you keep reading or writing on this section of literotica. Maybe you are not only limited in your emotional sphere but also impaired in your reading skills. Have somebody read the description of the section containts for you and try to explain you the meaning. This place is about extra-marital thrills, the juicer the better. I don't like cuckoldry and the story based on wimp husbands, so I just avoid them, why don't you try and avoid the whole loving wives area? You should be haunting the fetish section, because hating women, revenge on them, the psychological destruction of a female on the base of a made up (by the writer itself) situation can only be described as a fetish, and a sick one.

Ok, so she offs herself, I got no problem with that. If she doesn't then if karma prevails perhaps everyone she knows abandons her. No family, no friends and certainly no job. I can see her children doing a civil suit charging her as being directly responsible for the loss of their father. That should take away almost all her money. Best result would be for her to end up homeless. Of course she might have to take her skanky ass to another city as anyone with common decency would not give her anything but garbage to eat. And don't even think so much as a penny if talking panhandling for spare change. This slut would warrant someone telling her that they only had a hundred dollar bill, then asking if she has the ninety nine dollars and ninety nine cents needed to give them change.

Did she take her life or n0t?

Don't leave us hanging!

Well thought out and written.

Why is cheating not a crime?

In this case she caused his death, even with an unknown heart condition, he could have lived for many years.

Manslaughter???

at some part even the body gives up. TK U MLJ V NV

I have spent 25+ years working as a hack journalist.

More time should have been taken to not only introduce but actually get to know the characters. With the exception of the short dialogue and internal thoughts this read like a city crime report in the newspaper...detached.

I've said this before and I'll say it again. Cheaters seem to be the most stupid people there are. All should suffer.

I just read this and only gave it a four. I usually give fives, but not this time. I couldn't figure out why it was just a four until I read Harry's remarks. Gee I hate to give Harry credit for anything, but he was right. I thought something was missing, and the missing component was I just didn't know enough about Steve to make the thing click.

obviously the situation here is put to an extreme but let's be realstic ,cheating is a part of society,the danger lays in long term mariages where trust has become an habit ,you simply can't conceive your partner of many years cheating on you and when it gets out in many cases it destroys people,trust is ok but being carefull is better ,better save then sorry

depressing, and dark as possible.

she did hit a Grand Slam. TK U MLJ LV NV

I read this story, then the comments. And I expected at least one of the nutless wonders to come to her defense, some comment about how it's just about sex, he can learn to like it, etc. Nope. Not a one. And it makes me wonder if it's a case of either the nutless fucks can't stand a harsh dose of possible reality, or they just can't handle that stupid actions result in terrible consequences.

They pretend to care until they are married and then when they have what they want they don't give a shit about their husbands All women are the same and you can't trust them.

Just another wimp loser husband and a Cunt wife who obviously does care about him and gets away with it. All of this writer's pathetic stories are the same. And all the little faggots and Cunts will love this piece of shit story. This site should be titled FLC Faggots Losers n Cunts, this is their gathering place.

I guess all of us who read stories here comment are grotesque eunuchs (GE). But even us GEs need stories to entertain us. I liked the story, I hate husband stories where he is happy to be a cuckold. I guess that is part of being a GE.

after the fault, atonement and forgiveness, TK U MLJ LV NV

the woman wasnt worth his love much less his life

Most of the constant commenters in this category have never had a relationship - mostly because they are grotesque eunuchs who live on this site. Tourists such as yourself cannot understand the backwardness of the little clan who haunts this forum.

Your apparently old enough to read and write but seemingly haven't learned anything about life. You probably haven't even had a relationship, parent or friend, where you experienced real and deep love!

Was this guy a loser - 'Hell No' not in the sense you offer. This guy was a devoted, loving, caring man who was very much emotionally, romantically and dedicated the woman he loved and this scene of his departure, very and really possible!

There are animals that mate for life and some of us, just the same...oh, we are animals of a sort - You???

You set the stage well; told your tale; and had an ending. While the ending might not have been what everyone wanted, it was still a good because it gave closure to your story.

It should have been the cheating whore who dies in this one.

Fuck.

for him to be that pathetic of a man to lose the will to live because of a slut wife.

he was a loser from day he was born.

guess their really are people in this world that way