by ingarlm
I really like your stories, and this was an exciting beginning! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
yay am happt u are posting more stories. You are one og my favourite writers and I am always thrilled to see ur work
You r an amazing story teller and all of ur postings have captured my imagination. Dont know if I can wait a whole week for the next part LOL. But I hope u keep writing because so many of us are here waiting to read more from u.
Fabulous piece
I'm really excited about this series - it's new and it's certainly plot-filled. Keep up the good work.
As always, really great! Of course, the thought of waiting at least a week for the next installment is torture! Keep up the great work!
I'm a fan of most things you write, as you well know. I'll be keeping an eye out for this one. Great start.
Yay! Just my cup of tea :D Great introduction chapter. Its a winner already. Very, very, very captivating. Counting the days for the next installment!... Cat
I'm so glad you're back :) It was a really good start and I'm already excited about the next chapters. I'm also eagerly awaiting the other story you promised. Thank you!
The writing style is, as always, topdrawer! The hint of future sexy stuff gets us off the ground, but this is obviously going to be a complex story -- with both sexual and criminal adventures and suspense intermixed. This is bound to be fun, folks!
I like it. I can already see there's going to be a lot of drama and action. Lol