All Comments on 'Out Of The Shadows Ch. 06'

by ingarlm

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angelicsoundsangelicsoundsover 14 years ago
Beautiful

And so heartfelt. I understand why it was hard to write this, but I'm glad you did. I hope that it didn't take too much out of you and that you're able to write the next chapter soon. Don't make us wait too long. :) Keep up the wonderful work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Exquisite...

Just gorgeous. I just don't know how you do it. Give yourself a pat on the back. Gosh you're always making me cry *snif* - just stop it now lol.... Thanks for sharing... Cat

Danae72Danae72over 14 years ago
Always wonderful

I can see this going so many ways, and can't wait to see your direction. Awesome as always. Looking forward to the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Oh my freaking days!

You cannot make us wait a week for the next chapter!!!! Please post soon! I love this story (perhaps the excess amount of exclamation marks gave me away)!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Omg don't wait

U cant make us wait another week. I'll die if u do. Jk , but seriously dont make us waite please please please

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Oh Man!

How could you stop there?? They better get together. This story is so well written and keeping me on the edge of my seat. Please, please, please write the next chapter soon. Can not wait to see what happens next. Unless of course, it is not a happy ending!! Well done as always.

PiaraqPiaraqover 14 years ago
nooooooooooo

please post the next chapter asap... a week is too long,

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Holy god. Is all I can say. Such a great chapter and wondering what you have in store for the next chapter. Don't take long. <><NJ

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great progression

Can't wait to see where you're going to end up with their story. I liked the two POV's that moved the story along with only some overlap. Great job. Thanks for sharing your talent.

taxpapabobtaxpapabobover 14 years ago
Out of the Shadow of Evil

Brilliant, if painful, chapter! There is no greater pain or fear than when your beloved is facing death. And: "Greater love hath no man than to give up his life . . ." Excellent writing and subtle handling of the boiling cauldron of emotions!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Amazing

Amazing, everything you write is amazing!!!

This chapter has me in tears...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
so emotional

thanks for giving us rob's point of view, such a heartbreaking end, both being so brave

glad they got to tell each other how they felt

canndcanndover 8 years ago

glad they said i love you but why didn't rob tell him to tell the chief about a leak?? about knowing the house was under his real name and who would know that? Anything that might help. Did they have any holdings here? Tell him it was Tony so they concentrate on places he owns. DUH The story is great so far and this is the first time I'm even wanting to slow down to comment. i can't wait for more.

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