by SecretRogue
This story has lots of potential...subordinate taking charge! I enjoyed it!
If you knew anything about the Military, rank and male ego you'd know that this sad little tale is so totally worthless as to be laughable.
It wasn't a bad story, but the spelling and grammar mistakes pulled me out of the story and it took me awhile to get off.
Not the usual kinda of story i like, but it really got me turned on with the descriptions. Hope the story continues soon.
This is such a wonderful piece, and T was so disappointed to find out it's your only story so far. I hope you find time to write more and share the fruits of your talent with us all :) Thank you for this!