All Comments on 'Over a Barrel'

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wolfshadowwolfshadowalmost 16 years ago
Good

Good story, but a bit too short.

emersons62emersons62almost 16 years ago
oh my!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story...and maybe one day, I will have enough trust with a partner to try something like it!!

OceanmotherOceanmotherover 15 years ago
Yummy

Mmmmm, a juicy, delicious little story, has me hungry for more...

PassionatePattyPassionatePattyabout 15 years ago
I love the dialogue

A nice change from your other stories, in that you added dialogue. The characters are real and you did a very nice job... making me want more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
wow!!

I loved it. Slower and longer please. Is it uncomfortable for her at first? can he slip in slowly? Caould he spank her just a bit harder first -- no S&M, just enough to make her squeal a little? When he goes in, does she break wind just a little (nothing gross)?

Please more!

dear_prudencedear_prudenceover 14 years ago
delightful

I love the teasing.. would have enjoyed you dragging that out a little more.. but i really enjoyed this and adding it to my list of favorites (to read again).

AnnaAAnnaAalmost 14 years ago
I really enjoyed this

Thank you for a very sexy read. xxx

Ton8tyTon8tyover 12 years ago
Interesting

I enjoyed reading your story and had to laugh at your play on words at the end. I hope you intended to write "prey tell" rather than "pray tell", because, in context, it is apt and I found it humorous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Keep writing about this

The face down tied up image is very erotic. Not rape, of course, it has to be consensual. Take a look at "Making myself try it" by Leezy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

that pussy eating and anal was teasing hot and erotic

i like how he is so patient with her and so much concentrated on her pleasure and does his best to lessen the pain

he puts her before him even when he is a dom

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Male, 50's, married. I write because I enjoy it. I hope you enjoy reading it. If you do, let me know. Here to laugh, play, and fantasize.