by lakesailer_mi
I thoroughly enjoyed this story...and maybe one day, I will have enough trust with a partner to try something like it!!
A nice change from your other stories, in that you added dialogue. The characters are real and you did a very nice job... making me want more!
I loved it. Slower and longer please. Is it uncomfortable for her at first? can he slip in slowly? Caould he spank her just a bit harder first -- no S&M, just enough to make her squeal a little? When he goes in, does she break wind just a little (nothing gross)?
Please more!
I love the teasing.. would have enjoyed you dragging that out a little more.. but i really enjoyed this and adding it to my list of favorites (to read again).
I enjoyed reading your story and had to laugh at your play on words at the end. I hope you intended to write "prey tell" rather than "pray tell", because, in context, it is apt and I found it humorous.
The face down tied up image is very erotic. Not rape, of course, it has to be consensual. Take a look at "Making myself try it" by Leezy.
that pussy eating and anal was teasing hot and erotic
i like how he is so patient with her and so much concentrated on her pleasure and does his best to lessen the pain
he puts her before him even when he is a dom