by Bellie444
So let her bite him and scream rape for the camera....please
The slow development is incredible, and love how he's in complete control already
Your writing is awesome! I love the flow of the story. I vote for rough sex. ;--D
You have an interesting style and you write well, but it's hard to get over the cringey aspects of this. I think non-con is hot, especially office kind with an emotionally reserved and intelligent protagonist, but usually both parties secretly want it. and the aggressor is typically very giving to the reluctant party, helping convince them. Simon acts like he doesn't care about her or care to know anything about her at all. He comes off like a rapey psychopath, and instead of mashing their sexy bits I just want him to get checked into a mental ward and for her to get his job. The cringe is real.
I wonder why she didn't just scream. And why she thinks he won't just film her giving him head so she can't prove that he forced her
The psychological tactics are scarey, presenting her with a no-win situation but making her choose between bodily and emotional harm and just emotional harm. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.