All Comments on 'Overseer of the Harem Ch. 02'

Excellently written! Lives up to the promise of Chapter 1. Thank You! Hope there is more to come....

Yep, one of my favourites!

I can tell no one involved understood how female orgasms worked...but at the same time, Bagoas has made sure they can _have_ them, and that the girls _enjoy_ their work, not just have to do it. It's delicious to re-read, seeing how they're all being treated well and cared for, and it makes the sensuality that much better that they all feel safe and enjoy what they do (although the Pearl still seems snippy on re-reading, not very happy, and I wonder why). Consensual sex is a BIG turn-on for me, and all of this feels--at least by the standards of the time--about as consensual and enjoyable as it got. It's so great and refreshing.