All Comments on 'Paid Rent Receipt'

You capture the feelings of the girl really well.

Back when we were young, there were no apartment buildings in our small rural town. If you couldn't afford a house, you rented a room or a place over a garage from someone else. We actually rented the upper floor in an old Victorian home owned by a widower named Mr. Denham's. He loved looking at my wife's big tits and she loved to tease him. After about the first three months, she said she had worked out a deal with Mr. Denham where we could live there rent free and save for our own house. It turns out she was fucking him almost every day . I was mad at first but she convinced me it was for our future. And it turned out to definitely be for our future as the next year he had a heart attack and died. We found out from his lawyer that he left us the entire house in his will.

Promising. More should have been written to describe her, especially her breasts. You should write about the next month, when he takes her ass.