All Comments on 'Painters Delight'

It would have been much more erotic if you had accidently gotten her pregnant, even if you did not want to get married at that time.

I just wish it had lasted longer.

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Aside from the few typos and punctuation errors (I can let 'em pass lol) that was amazing!

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Remember me telling you about that other author of mine that I absolutely DIE over every time I read his work?

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Yeah, you rank RIGHT up there with number 1 as well. I rank you on a different level, because this story/your style is MUCH different from him and there's no comparison for genres.

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Your writing is BEAUTIFUL!

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It flows SO well. The story is told so... sequentially (seeming). It's nice. It's not hard to read. It's easy... which is what I will be needing in the next few stories to come with yours, as I will be "not holding back my urge" as you requested if such emotion struck me upon reading your submission - and it has.

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^_~

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The story was great but I have noticed that most of the men in these stories have either 7"8"or 9" cocks.

I don't think that is the real world. Maybe you have really big cock but most of us don't

Grammar and punctuation errors aside, your short story read easy and authentic. It was more than just a story about sex. It is a sweet little story about a boy becoming a man, told with warm authenticity. It reads truthful, almost autobiographical.

I gave you 5-stars because of the content and the feel of authenticity you projected. I liked this story very much, A_N_L. Keep up the good work!

Oh, and for future reference, please break down your paragraphs into four-five lines at the most. Reading online is harder than from a paper page, and smaller paragraphs are most helpful. :-)

great story keep writing but please spell check (just a pet peeve of mine) lol

Take out then. Too many of them. Great first time story.