All Comments on 'Panty Fetish to Submission'

by sammy_u

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
5 for the idea--ideal which I share and thus am

aroused by. 1 for syntax and word choice = an average of "3." I think it would be helpful for you to have an editor whose first language is American English.

jjws%)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Good story

keep writing.

Harry_BallsackHarry_Ballsackalmost 13 years ago
Great Story

I really enjoyed reading this one. You could easily turn this story into a series.

Keep up the great work.

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