by longhornmike
great paced story, well written, and a pretty cool conclusion -
A Maine reader
It is wonderful to give a woman that oral pleasure, and to receive it back, but because my wife had problems before we married she does not do oral. That does not really bother me, as I can ejaculate just by eating her pussy and giving her the release she needs.
Great story, very nicely written (a rarity on LitE), keep up the good work!
Very nicely done. Well written. Kept me wondering the entire time. Looking forward to another chapter.
Thank you for working such a sexy theme into a story. I have always loved the panties of my lovers and have been gifted them on occasion...paying for them seems so naughty and exciting. Well done. I hope the continuation see her catch him sniffing them and...all the good things that follow being caught in that kind of compromising situation.
This deserves a follow up for sure. Great writing. I'm thinking he should eat her asshole out and describe it's scent and taste too. More of this story. 5 stars.
Excellent story and really well written. Would have liked more panty action though. Would have taken the panty wank over the blowjob any day.
An unusual approach to a girl (asking to buy her panties) that won't succeed in 99.9999% of real cases, but hey, this is fantasy stuff and works in getting my engine running!!
Would love to read a follow up chapter, or two, as your writing is superb
great story!! loved the doing the boss`s daughter twist at the end!! thanks paull
One of the best stories I've read on this site. It was an exciting and sultry. Left me with a smile on my face and cum on the floor. Hope the is a second chapter. Thx
Good premise.
Sex is too automatic.
Needed far more preliminaries/foreplay.
The $200 for the blowjob could/should have covered being naked together, making out, making each other feel good with hands, tits, and other appropriate body parts before the main event of reciprocal oral.
Four stars.