by nebthor
go back to reading comic books, little boy. plot lines and sequential flow are beyond your ability.
Wine for breakfast? Saturday school? Vodka laced oatmeal? And of course that unrealistic HUGE cock. Not even close to a good story.
dude, learn how to coherently form your ideas and not just pull stuff outta your asss. try again and try harder.
Even your user name shows no originality, Ben. If this is how you plan on seducing women, with vodka-laced oatmeal, maybe you should stick with your mom, she must be as much the idiot as you say your dad is.
At least try and add some realism. The plot was much too thin for this abomination to even be called a story.
it was bad horny monkeys couldve done a better job. now a story with a vodka-laced bananna is interesting........
Try some realism next time. You started off good, but on the following graphs you lost it and the story read like SHIT!!!!
man people are stupid sleeping with another just because their husband has a little dick really stupid bitches they are if I was a girl I will be happy with the sex unlike those whores I wouldn't cheat or leave them
Any of you negative idiots notice that the author is 19 years old? He thinks and writes as is natural for a lad his age, and it's very sexy! Like most all sons he's mighty attracted to his mother's cunt, though most repress the urge and he sure doesn't! He loves the idea that his mom is captivated by her son's big prick (again, like other sons), can't keep her eyes and hands off what the boy's got jumping in his shorts. He sure beats his shrimp-peckered dad down between his legs, where it counts most for his cock-loving mom. When he shoves his fat 9+ incher up his mother's tight wet twat both mother and son know that's exactly where his big stiff dick is meant to go. Finally--it's back up where it belongs, stretching and filling his mother's cunt! Then he has every son's supreme satisfaction of unloading his hot young balls up his mother's mommy-twat and creaming his own birth canal! More stories of motherfucking from his fine young author, please!
This story was good,it made my huge cock stir. But your story was to short. I love that your mom has big Tits,as mine does to,but hers are 38DDD,but unfortunately she has yet to act on her obvious lust for my big member
How about having oth mom and son cuckold dad. Make dad like suck his son's cum from her pussy and then suck his son's cock clean, but not be able to touch his wife sexually ever again! Have the son and mother in the master bedroom and move the dad into the son's room.