All Comments on 'Paper Girl Ch. 02'

Very well done. I liked that Dan didn't have a clue of why Harriet was acting upset - some people just don't have a clue. I felt that was realistic. I liked that you didn't rush Dan and Becky into sex. Having Becky and Dan get together at the end was a good way to do it. It allowed both of them to move on and allowed Dan to get back to Harriet. Nice dialogue and enjoyable scenes. Good, hot sex scenes too. Now I need to go back to some of your other stories that I liked but haven't re-read recently.

It was a pleasure to read something written in such a natural, free flowing style. Thank you, Magmaman.

Very enjoyable and well written. Thanks!

I was very disappointed in the outcome of this story. It could have been developed into something much more erotic.

Of love....so glad he got to fuck the young girl before she left.....could have developed their relationship a bit more but at least he had the lass across the road to go and hose down.....

Hot young red head plus guy 60+ equals 5 stars. Tonight I'll be dreaming of a pretty redhead I knew way back when.