All Comments on 'Papi's Girl'

Excellent story, a major turn on.

From one who rarely reads stories of this nature, I enjoyed this one greatly. I found myself involved with these characters which is hard to do, especially as your nick suggests you are female. Very well done story from the male point of view. Congrats.

SN

The interaction between the papi and daughter was so sensual. Thank you for this lovely sexy story.

Add a touch of no birth control or future pregnancy and whalaa!

It was a well written story. I think you should continue the series for a while till the readers over here get bored.

I thought it was brilliant. It wasnt really hott hott, but it was extremley well written.

Not too bad, not too bad at all.

Loved it. So did the (not-so-)little guy.

What language?

Thought it was pretty good but the constant spanish interdialogue threw me off. Some of it is good but too much is a drawback when your audience has little or no education of the language.

I loved it. A very sexy story and I felt that the Spanish added to it. You don't have to be a linguistic genius to figure out what those few words meant.

Very well done in spite of the difficult and taboo subject.

One of the best stories I've ever encountered: sensual, involving and passionate - please write more of these!!

Loved it. Great style, climatic...more !!!more!!!

YOUR DENIAL OF HER AND THEN UR ACCEPTANCE WERE TOTALLY INVOLVING ...........YOU MUST DO MORE,,,,, UR A GENIUS FOR SUCH A TOUCHY SUBJECT!

So realistic...felt like I was right there...very nice**Soft Smile**

I liked your characters very much and you did a good job of involving the read. I personally liked the touches of Spanish in the story. I don't think the sentiment, the meaning of the words gets lost in the story. I hope to see more from you.

Perhaps the text in Spanish is not for everyone, but it was a total turn-on for me, leaving me wet and ready for more. It helps, of course, that I am Hispanic myself. Wow, what a story. Keep up the great work!

vivid details that made the story interesting and hot until the end!

The story was so involving, so tender and loving that it kept me hooked til the end. And add it's length to that and that's a bad ass story. Good job, write a sequal or something!

such a sweet, loving story, it made me wish I had the experience myself, I can't wait to read more , please continue

such a sweet, loving story, it made me wish I had the experience myself, I can't wait to read more , please continue

This is the very best kind of father/daughter incest story...so loving and tender. I'm a girl your age, and I love the way you wrote this from the daddy's point of view. Please keep up the amazing work!

that was amazing, really well written, total turn on, my cock is raging I want to do that to the writer, I can only imagine licking the wet pussy till it squirms......

What an amazing comment, Im a woman aged 21 and i would love to have the same experience with my dad. Keep the good writing up! Prob the best ive read. Thanks_xox

now i have to clean up. that was HOT.

I loved this story it made me so so hot and with the spanish it was even hotter. Maybe cause it reminds me of home. Great work keep it up

how wet i got reading this---would love my dad to take me this way...so tender-so loving-from the one man who will always love me

Your story is well written. I enjoyed how you wrote about the father and his concern for her, although he made a mistake in not protecting her. I hope you plan on writing more about this couple. Keep up the good work

i am a girl of 18 in uni--- it is a nice experiencei will want to av--- cannot imagine the length of dads cock

Great tension, hesitation, emotion, pacing... everything a story like this needs! I could imagine everything. Very well done!

Many a daughter has teased and fantasized about their father, usually the first male love focus in their life. Many a father has had fleeting, or more, thoughts of their lovely, nubile daughters. The comments from your other readers tend to verify this thought. I believe most fathers remain parents and do not attempt to become their daughter's lovers, but continue to be a loving parent. That said, this was a thoroughly enjoyable read, triggering fleeting memories from long ago...

I might just have to share this story with my Papi.

My (daddy) Dom is Mexican and this was soooo hot, I loved reading in a story what MY Papi says to me <3 I would love more

Thankfully sensitive