All Comments on 'Paradox'

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bruce22bruce22over 15 years ago
Interesting

Once again, as an isolated incident, great. But I keep wondering about what comes next in a normal social context.

He has been following this fantasy for eight years!Has Jane spent all this time waiting for it to happen...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wow!

Well written and HOT, HOT, HOT! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
really snappy writing

loved the description - just the right amount of character detail. Keep up the great work!

EhmelAaltoEhmelAaltoabout 15 years ago
crass maybe, but very hot

Short, snappy, lovely. I am not sure about this note of desire for self-degradation recurring in your stories, but if taken as a game it's sexy indeed.

I personally like the scenario very much (though I doubt I could pretend to be in such a denial about it). Cum on my tits especially rocks my boat :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
continuation

If he had followed her to the shower, and pushed things just a little bit, she would have pretended to be disgusted and then eagerly given in to anything he wanted. You might continue your story with that thought in mind.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
We both enjoy this

My husband and I love to watch each other masturbate/ I enjoy watching him get hard and wet with all his pre-cum. He smears it all over his balls and looks so sexy jacking off.

I use a candle inside my wet pussy while I watch him jack-off. I beg him to cream all over my tits.

He has begged me to let him cum all over my face and I made adeal with him. I asked him to find me a couple of well-hung men and let them double fuck me while I take his load on my face and then have him eat my pussy while I suck them both off

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