All Comments on 'Paranormal Research Club Ch. 02'

Loved it. Chapter 3 can't come soon enough

Thank you

Please! Chapter 3!

This was a great story, PLEASE continue it. You gave us a great incite, please continue for all the readers.

Amazing story can't wait for the next chapter.

Keep it up. :)

u have writen a best seller man if it wasnt for the whole worlds view on incest that would be the most read story in the world i swear. thank u

I hope there is some sibling loving in the chapters ahead!

Another 5 star chapter. Keep on rockin with this. I get a feeling that ol John's gonna have a bunch of kids to feed! Two cousins, sister, mom , aunt and best friend. That's six kids!

It looks like all the main characters in this story has some huge memory problems, because they constantly remind themselves who they are to each other. For example, when John fucks his cousin and calls her 'cousin' every ten seconds... Seriously, do you think WE have memory problems? It's enough to read about their relationship twice at the beginning and that's it. You can use their names, or simply let them call each other "you". Simple as that. Constantly reminding about their incest makes them more annoying. And it makes YOU more annoying, as their writer.

You are laying the foundations for an epic tale IMHO

Just a clarification on the topic. Marriage between first cousins is legal in a number of states - 19 U.S. states allow marriages between first cousins, and 7 U.S. states allow only some marriages between first cousins

Sarah >>> Heather

I am now into this story and find it remarkably sensual. The dream sharing is an unusual point of view for this reader. I like the fact that the participants of the dream remember all of it. I want to see how the characters handle the dream knowledge in their real world.