All Comments on 'Paranormal Research Club Ch. 06'

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SyrustheVirusSyrustheVirusover 10 years ago
Amazing as Always

Caption says it all. Can't wait for next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

awesome .

LancerInLALancerInLAover 10 years ago
My my

Do you want to add another element or 2? It doesn't seem complex enough.

I really wish there was a sarcasm font.

Still, well done. 5*

Val

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Can't wait for the next Chapter!!

This whole series is absolutely amazing! Plot and amazing sex are seldom seen together. I can't wait until the next chapter and hope you continue this story out to fruition! Love it!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

One of the best story I ever read.

Flymaster60Flymaster60over 10 years ago
BEST EVER

I have read most of the highest ranked stories in this area... this is by far the best of them all.....SORRY JammyJimmy, beachbum1958... This story should be 10 stars....

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Don't ever stop!

I love this series!!! I can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
PLEASE CONTINUE!

This story has it all. Great character development good sex and awsome story plotting! Please continue Im waiting for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
OMFG

I agree with most of the coments already posted, you truly are a Michealangelo with a "pen" so to speak. I can't wait for the next chapter in this series. Also I can see the cogs turning for a future addition after the have left vermont. This is trully one of my favourite series it is well thoght out and not rushed which makes this a pleasure to read.

theanalisttheanalistover 10 years ago
absolutely loved it

waiting for next chapter....wonder why I waited so long to read it....

Hart_cdnHart_cdnover 10 years ago
Love This Chapter

Great story...and waiting anxiously for the next chapter.

Thank you for another great read.

TorexTorexover 10 years ago
More Please!!!!

I have read and awaited with eager anticipation each instalment of your story and I cannot wait for the next to appear. Please keep writing!!

Lonely_readerLonely_readeralmost 10 years ago
This story

Looks a lot like "High school again?"

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great Story but why Heather?

I have just finished this chapter and think this story is quite amazing and would love to see it go past the 8 chapters you have listed if you write anymore of this series. My question is why is Heather the soulmate? She seems to lack substance other than just a long time cousin whereas characters like Diana and Sarah seem like better fits. If he can have Rachelle and Cherise as soulmates as well, it is possible you plan to soulmate the other girls with him?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
im getting a mix of "supernatural" and "scp" erotica style from this story

supernatural is a tv show that deals with gods, demons, ghosts, ect., and scp is an game/lore.. 'thing' that deals with metaphysical/uber scientific things that can bend and affect reality.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Brilliant read!!

Blasphemy aside you are a great story teller. This would be a great movie script.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Awesome!

I agree, with both! You are an awesome storyteller and this would make a wonderful movie.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I liked it

Great story. I just feel like I've been left hanging. Where's the finishing chapter 9?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I usually grow bored with stories that are this long, but not this time. I only wish you had gone on to finish it rather than leave us with no conclusion to the story. I am curious as to why you would choose someone as innocuous as Heather to be John's soul mate when Dianna would have made so much more sense. Otherwise, great story. Please give us a final chapter that will close things out.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aabout 1 year ago

This story has now got my attention. The interactions between humans, gods, goddesses. demons, etc is enjoyable. I hate short stories. I like indepth character development. I like logical plot/subplot development. I have mentally gone full circle with this story. Overall, I have rated it 5 stars. Well done.

PS: I hope the reader remember his/her Greek, Roman, Norse, Myso, Africian, and Middle Eastern mythology.

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