All Comments on 'Paris Vacation'

You could have developed it to be somewhat longer with this great theme.

Hopefully you will continue with the "Education"

Good set-up, nice understanding of the main character's motivation...and then the actual romance and sex was crammed into a few paragraphs. Might be worth it to take some time and create a longer version...

SG

about the nights that followed the first one. You have a great knowledge of Paris to use; it makes the story feel genuine. A nice read, please write more.