All Comments on 'Partners In Crime'

Not as excited about it as the author obviously was.

Has your keyboard lost the full stop and been replaced by an exclamation mark?! Makes an otherwise good story really hard to read.

Your exclamation marks are EVERYWHERE, they are good at points, but not every sentence. This might have been a good story with the proper editor, but sadly, it was not.

that is da best bi story yet brilliant twist in de end but a little bit dissappionted but who gives a shit dat was brill

Your story "Partners In Crime", is good for a bisexual story. I was disappointed to read my first lesbian story here today and it turned out to be a bisexual story put in a lesbian sex category? I picked Lesbian Sex Stories to read women who love women stories! I'm surprise that this site doesn't have a category for "Bisexual Sex", which is what your story is! But I guess that is what they call the "Group Sex" category?? But anyway, I do want to say, "Thanks for Sharing your story". Debmas1

exclamation marks are as annoying as cap letters.